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Jab naam tere dil pe kisi gair ka likh jayega...

by deepraghav on March 27, 2014, 02:42:47 PM

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"Mere dil me chubheinge nastar-e-gam ke shigaaf...jab naam tere dil pe kisi gair ka likha jayega...aaj to chhipa lunga apni aankon ki namee...kal mujhse bhi har aik dard ka hisaab maanga jayega...mere dil me bhadkeinge gam-e-dard ke shole...jab teri maang me sindoor bhara jayega...Log puchheinge mujhse mery udaasi ka sabab aur mera naam bhi deewaano me likha jayega..Gairon ke liyein vasl...aur mere liyein ye hizr-e-gam...kaisa dastoor hai ye teri muhabbat ka deep"....kab tak ye rasm-O-rivaaj..yunhi chalta jayega..Mere dil me chubheinge nastar-e-gam ke shigaaf...jab naam tere dil pe kisi gair ka likha jayega" deep'


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Re: Jab naam tere dil pe kisi gair ka likh jayega...

«Reply #1 on: March 27, 2014, 03:44:58 PM »

अच्छा लिखा है ....थोड़ी formatting की ज़रूरत है....


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Re: Jab naam tere dil pe kisi gair ka likh jayega...

«Reply #2 on: March 28, 2014, 02:31:46 AM »

Good Work.


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Re: Jab naam tere dil pe kisi gair ka likh jayega...

«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2014, 02:42:11 PM »

...thanks formating me hi thodi dikkat aati hai...kya aap kuchh sugession deinge..


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Re: Jab naam tere dil pe kisi gair ka likh jayega...

«Reply #4 on: March 30, 2014, 02:52:53 PM »

vry nice....


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