kaise kya lilkhe hum..

by killbill on November 15, 2010, 08:10:31 AM
Pages: [1] 2  All
Print
Author  (Read 1443 times)
killbill
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 0
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
24 days, 7 hours and 41 minutes.
Posts: 2130
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
haathon me lekar kalam..
soch me pad gaye hum !!!
kaise kya aur kisliye kuch bhi likhe hum..
na hi koi shayar ya fir..
na hi ik kavi hain hum !!!
bas yun hi khayalon me khoye rahe..
apne dil ki aansuo se kisi ki yaadon ko..
dho kar mitate rahe hum !!!
fir ik ehsaas sa hua ..
kahin ik tees si uthi..
kahin ik dard sa hua..
aansuon ki bauchaar hui aur..
rote rah gaye hum!!!
jaise hi toota dhyan..
koi na tha kisi ki yaadon or mere darmiyan..!!!
fir socha mene ki..
kaise likhe kya likhe aur kisliye likhe hum..!!
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
Kaise Ho? by zahir_2005india in SMS , mobile & JOKES
Din ho kaise bhi...... by Just_Hate_Love in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2  All »
Kaise mai tum se keh du by captainyr in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
Kaise kaise halaaton mein roye hum by Rajesh Harish in Miscellaneous Shayri « 1 2  All »
Dekho ye zindgi kaise kaise rang dikhati hai by praveen k in Shayari ki Batein- Sawaal Jawaab
AbhiTamrakar
Guest
«Reply #1 on: November 15, 2010, 08:20:27 AM »
killbill ji bahut umda likha he apne...thodi si lines ko manjne ki jarurat lagti he...mujhe...

dher saaari daad ~
Logged
killbill
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 0
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
24 days, 7 hours and 41 minutes.
Posts: 2130
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
«Reply #2 on: November 15, 2010, 09:30:39 AM »
dhanyabaad Abhi...
asal me mene likha nhi bas ye aise hi ho gaya bhai..
...
Logged
khwahish
WeCare
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 166
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
272 days, 5 hours and 50 minutes.

Posts: 11814
Member Since: Sep 2006


View Profile
«Reply #3 on: November 15, 2010, 09:33:02 AM »
Bahut Khoob Killbill Ji..

Likhte Rahiye Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
killbill
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 0
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
24 days, 7 hours and 41 minutes.
Posts: 2130
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
«Reply #4 on: November 15, 2010, 09:38:20 AM »
shukriya Khwahis ji...
aap aise hi mera hausala badhate rahiye ..
waqt se hum nahi sikhte kuch,
hume to ek sahara chahiye..
fasi hui hai ik kashti,
bas ek kinaara chahiye...
Logged
madhuwesh
Guest
«Reply #5 on: November 26, 2010, 08:01:23 AM »
Bahut hi pasand aayi aapke dard bhari kavita Kb ji,apne ehsaaso ko bahut hi khoobsurti se likha.hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
killbill
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 0
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
24 days, 7 hours and 41 minutes.
Posts: 2130
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
«Reply #6 on: November 26, 2010, 08:12:09 AM »
thanku Madhu ji:)
***kya khoob kaha hai kisi ne-
!!jab dard nhi tha seene me
        kya khaak maza tha jeene me!!
 
Logged
*KasaK*....Dil Ki
Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 19
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
67 days, 9 hours and 25 minutes.
"I hv a prsnality wch evrybdy cn't handle

Posts: 5603
Member Since: Jun 2010


View Profile
«Reply #7 on: November 26, 2010, 10:07:17 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

KB mujhe aapka ye bina tarashe likhne ka andaaz bada achcha lagta hai...
Logged
killbill
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 0
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
24 days, 7 hours and 41 minutes.
Posts: 2130
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
«Reply #8 on: November 26, 2010, 10:21:14 AM »
actually Kasak ji...
mujhe likhna hi nhi aata to kya khak taraste kuch.
jo b man me aya likh kr chispa deta hu yahan waha ..
Logged
Rajesh Harish
Guest
«Reply #9 on: November 26, 2010, 11:44:47 AM »
haathon me lekar kalam..
soch me pad gaye hum !!!
kaise kya aur kisliye kuch bhi likhe hum..
na hi koi shayar ya fir..
na hi ik kavi hain hum !!!
bas yun hi khayalon me khoye rahe..
apne dil ki aansuo se kisi ki yaadon ko..
dho kar mitate rahe hum !!!
fir ik ehsaas sa hua ..
kahin ik tees si uthi..
kahin ik dard sa hua..
aansuon ki bauchaar hui aur..
rote rah gaye hum!!!
jaise hi toota dhyan..
koi na tha kisi ki yaadon or mere darmiyan..!!!
fir socha mene ki..
kaise likhe kya likhe aur kisliye likhe hum..!!

Nice one Killbill Ji
Logged
nirala
Guest
«Reply #10 on: March 20, 2011, 08:27:02 AM »
otte Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
Logged
killbill
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 0
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
24 days, 7 hours and 41 minutes.
Posts: 2130
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
«Reply #11 on: May 05, 2011, 01:38:52 PM »
Nice one Killbill Ji
thanx guruji…
kaha ho aap?
Logged
saahill
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 86
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
147 days, 14 hours and 9 minutes.
Posts: 18588
Member Since: Jun 2009


View Profile
«Reply #12 on: May 05, 2011, 02:10:11 PM »
boht khoob kilbil ji ,
kya bat hai kilbil ji koi narazgi hai . Ap jaise barhe shayaron se daad mil jaye to acha lagta hai
Logged
killbill
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 0
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
24 days, 7 hours and 41 minutes.
Posts: 2130
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
«Reply #13 on: May 05, 2011, 02:27:07 PM »
boht khoob kilbil ji ,
kya bat hai kilbil ji koi narazgi hai . Ap jaise barhe shayaron se daad mil jaye to acha lagta hai
hahaha …
mai aur bada shayar!!!
sahill……ye kon sa tarika dhund nikala aapne insult karne ka ji……
hum to khud ko ab is qabil hi nai smjhte ki kisi ko daad de sake……
islie to apne post par hi sbko thanx kah rahe dekhiye na aap…
bhai galti hui ho kb se to maafi dijiye lekin u bade shayr to na kahiye
Logged
saahill
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 86
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
147 days, 14 hours and 9 minutes.
Posts: 18588
Member Since: Jun 2009


View Profile
«Reply #14 on: May 05, 2011, 02:36:18 PM »
iska matlab ap naraz hain
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
Print
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
April 24, 2024, 09:20:05 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[April 23, 2024, 09:54:09 AM]

by ASIF
[April 22, 2024, 01:50:33 PM]

[April 04, 2024, 04:49:28 PM]

[April 02, 2024, 12:27:12 PM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:34:54 AM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:30:44 AM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:26:39 AM]

by ASIF
[March 23, 2024, 08:50:46 AM]

[March 21, 2024, 07:59:38 PM]

[March 17, 2024, 02:01:29 PM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.102 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8498 Real Poets and poetry admirer