veeran sa huya hai..

by deepraghav on December 15, 2014, 01:46:54 PM
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" Tumko khoke ye jeevan...veeran Sa hua hai...har dard Teri khalvaton ka...mera armaan Sa Hua hai...Main dharti hun Teri pyaasi...tu aasman Sa Hua hai...Ab laut bhi aa jaanam vaapas meri panahon me...lagta nahein hai dil mera tanhaeion Ki bahon me...tere bina ye ghar bayabaan Sa Hua hai" deep"
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«Reply #1 on: December 15, 2014, 10:54:48 PM »
Bohat vadiya waaahhh
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«Reply #2 on: December 16, 2014, 11:53:46 AM »
Tumko khoke ye jeevan veeran Sa hua hai,
har dard Teri khalvaton ka mera armaan Sa Hua hai,

Main dharti hun Teri pyaasi,
tu aasman Sa Hua hai,

Ab laut bhi aa jaanam vaapas meri panahon me,
lagta nahein hai dil mera tanhaeion Ki bahon me,

tere bina ye ghar bayabaan Sa Hua hai
" deep"

bahut khoob deep,beautiful line...,bs thoda sequence me lines likenge aap agar to bahut achi lagegi rachna padne me..
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«Reply #3 on: December 21, 2014, 04:52:14 PM »
Accha likha hai deepraghav ji
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