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by srishti raj chintak on March 01, 2013, 01:57:38 AM
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सपनों के स्वप्निल सागर में
डूब रहा "मैं"
ढूँढ रहा हूँ
इक अपना, ना हो सपना
वैसे तो मै ख़ुद हूँ सपना
फिर भी सपनों से
रूठ रहा हूँ, ढूँढ रहा हूँ
इक अपना, ना हो सपना
ये धन - जीवन, विद्या - अध्ययन
पुत्र -पिता, पत्नी - माता
बेटी - बंधु, गंगा - सिन्धु
मन्दिर - गिरजा, मस्जिद - पूजा
ये भ्रम ही तो हैं, हैं सपना
इनमें है नही कोई अपना
इस भीड़ भरी दुनिया में भी
जीवन के इस सूने पथ पर
घूम रहा हूँ, ढूँढ रहा हूँ
इक अपना, ना हो सपना
क्या मिल पाएगा वो अपना ?
क्या होगा सच, मेरा सपना
मैं ढूँढ रहा हूँ, इक अपना
जो मेरा हो, ना कि सपना
मेरा अपना, मेरा अपना
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«Reply #1 on: March 01, 2013, 02:05:38 AM »
Your first post and it is very very beautiful, definitely a mature approach to poetry.

Welcome Shrishti Raj Chintak to Yoindia Shayariadab.

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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2013, 02:26:05 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: March 01, 2013, 02:36:42 AM »
 Applause Applause
bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2013, 03:31:07 AM »
 :clap:nice
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«Reply #5 on: March 15, 2013, 12:35:33 AM »
pps
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«Reply #6 on: April 18, 2013, 11:53:30 PM »
देरी के लिए माफ करें.  सभी का धन्यवाद.
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«Reply #7 on: April 19, 2013, 01:07:31 AM »
Bahut Khoob...Dheron badhaiyaan..
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«Reply #8 on: May 02, 2013, 06:27:01 AM »
Sorry, Musaahib ji, I am late, many many thanks.
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