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«Reply #120 on: January 17, 2013, 11:54:07 AM » |
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Kia baat hai Aqsh Jee bahut khoob.... 
Tumhe kia bataayeN kia guzri hai dil par
Hume apni aaNkhoN meiN basaa na sake tum
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«Reply #121 on: January 17, 2013, 12:01:30 PM » |
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Tum hamari aankhon mein dekhte to aitbaar ho jaata
Na karte humse gile, shikwe aur bas pyaar ho jaata
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«Reply #122 on: January 17, 2013, 12:11:38 PM » |
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teri aankho ki gahrai me jab bhi dekha
chalakate ashqon me chehra apna hi dekha
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«Reply #123 on: January 17, 2013, 12:21:52 PM » |
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Dekha hai mere chalakte ashqon mein apna chehra
Dekh na paaye tum mere dil mein basa andhera
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«Reply #124 on: January 17, 2013, 12:28:50 PM » |
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tere dil ki baat mujhse chup nahi sakti
roshni pyaar ki in anderon me chup nahi sakti
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«Reply #127 on: January 17, 2013, 05:04:35 PM » |
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Hun bura is liye gam mein bhi muskura deta hoon
Hokar bebas khuda ke aage sar ko jhuka deta hoon
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«Reply #128 on: January 17, 2013, 06:50:11 PM » |
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Aqsh jee Aadaab!
jee aap shayad rule ko thik se nahi samjhi, so aapko rule bata dete haiN...
Aap jaise antakshri khelte hai waise hi yahaaN aapko sher ke aakhri hurf se
dusra jawaabi sher kahna ha naki aakhri lafz se..
Humaare dil meiN tumhaari chahat samandar se bhi hai gehri
Tumhari yaadoN meiN hai guzri humari subho humaari shaame
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«Reply #130 on: January 18, 2013, 05:34:55 AM » |
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Meri aankhon ke samandar mein jalan kaisi hai
Aaj phir dil ko tadapne ki lagan kaisi hai
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«Reply #131 on: January 18, 2013, 05:39:17 AM » |
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hai khafaa wo hamaare ek baat se kahaa nahi kuch usne kal raat se...  |
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«Reply #132 on: January 18, 2013, 05:46:19 AM » |
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samundar ko rehne do gehrai ka guroor
wo kabhi ishq-e-daria me dooba hi nahi
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«Reply #133 on: January 18, 2013, 05:47:21 AM » |
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Aqsh Jee And Mishra Jee Sorry to say aap dono is
thread ke rules sahiN se follow nahi kar rahe haiN...
Please read the rules of this thread carefuly and then giv your
replys...
Teri duaaoN meiN apna naam chahtaa huN
Aaye meri jaanib aisa salaam chahta huN
rule batane ke liye bahut sukriya parwaaz ji |
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«Reply #134 on: January 18, 2013, 08:56:11 AM » |
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It's ok Aqsh jee Mishra jee bade bade deshoN meiN chhoti chhoti
baateN hoti rahti hai... 
Hai agar tumko chahat sitaaroN ki jaanaaN
Meri aaNkhoN meiN tum khud ko dekh lo naa
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