this ghazal is written by Qateel Shifai

by a.r.hashmi on December 28, 2012, 11:09:37 AM
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Chura k lay gaya Jaam or Piyas chorh gaya.

Wo ak shaks jo mujhko Udaas chorh gaya.

Jo meray Jism ki Chadar bana rha barson.

Na jany kiun wo mujhay Bay-Libaas chor gaya.

Hayaat jaag uthi hay Qareeb paa k usay.

Gaya to charon taraf ek Aas chorh gaya.

Wo sath lay gaya sari Mohabtein apni.

Zara sa Dard meray Dil k paas chorh gaya.

Sujhai dayta nahi Door tak koi Manzar.

Wo ak Dhund meray aas paas chorh gaya.

Ghazal sajaon QATEEL ab usi ki Baton ki.

Jo mujh me apnay Sukhn ki Mithaas chorh gaya.
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«Reply #1 on: December 28, 2012, 11:18:26 AM »
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bahut khoob  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: December 28, 2012, 11:43:45 AM »
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wah wah wah  bohut umda sharing
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«Reply #3 on: December 28, 2012, 11:46:19 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2012, 11:52:17 AM »
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Wah Wah!!! Behtareen, Kya Kehne aap ke!!! Bohat Khub!! Ek Rau Aap Ke Liye!!! Bohat aachi post select ki hai aap ne!!



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«Reply #5 on: December 28, 2012, 11:54:56 AM »
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bohut khub bohut umda
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«Reply #6 on: December 28, 2012, 01:37:01 PM »
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nyc sharing saahab, keep saring....!!
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«Reply #7 on: December 28, 2012, 02:53:46 PM »
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Aadab Janab!



Badi umdaa sharing hai yeH bhi... aapki choise ka bhi jawab nahi..
Aise hi umdaa sharing ke saath aur apne kalaamoN ke saath aate rahiye...


Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
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«Reply #8 on: December 28, 2012, 05:12:46 PM »
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nice sharing
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«Reply #9 on: December 28, 2012, 08:53:34 PM »
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Chura k lay gaya Jaam or Piyas chorh gaya.

Wo ak shaks jo mujhko Udaas chorh gaya.

Jo meray Jism ki Chadar bana rha barson.

Na jany kiun wo mujhay Bay-Libaas chor gaya.

Hayaat jaag uthi hay Qareeb paa k usay.

Gaya to charon taraf ek Aas chorh gaya.

Wo sath lay gaya sari Mohabtein apni.

Zara sa Dard meray Dil k paas chorh gaya.

Sujhai dayta nahi Door tak koi Manzar.

Wo ak Dhund meray aas paas chorh gaya.

Ghazal sajaon QATEEL ab usi ki Baton ki.

Jo mujh me apnay Sukhn ki Mithaas chorh gaya.


gr88888888888888888888888 sharing,sir
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«Reply #10 on: December 28, 2012, 08:54:21 PM »
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awesome sharing
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«Reply #11 on: December 29, 2012, 04:09:39 AM »
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nawazish, wo kisi ne kaha tha na k, dekhnay wali aankh aur sunnanay walay kaan ka zøk haseen hota hy, cheez nahi, aap tamaam k haseen zøk ko salaam.
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