First Write

[Muhib]

Talab-e-kurbat-e-dildar ab baki na rahi

Hasrat-e-deedar-e-hushne-yaar ab baki na rahi


Ji sakte he hum bhi ab pur waqar

Ab hume tujhse muhabbat beshumar baki na rahi

Please Critic or give suggestions, This is one of my first writes