dark world

by akashsharma1990 on May 16, 2012, 11:56:17 AM
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In this world
We are all screwed
We dont have fresh food
And We just intrude
Behave like shrewd

In this world
We dont have lifes
Just look for ideal wives
Want to eat apple
But all we have are blunt knives

We have no side though
Roads are open wide so,
All ways are tried
Now You want some peace
Even the Dove is fried

See Everybody fights
They Lost their sights
No longer flying kites
Only dark days
and haunted nights

We have to stop this
Before it give us final hit
Find what we had missed
But on the top of it
Just cut the crap shit
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«Reply #1 on: May 16, 2012, 01:33:50 PM »
good
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«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2012, 02:45:27 PM »
amazing it can sound good in rap song
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«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2012, 05:58:53 PM »
@misfit: actually it is a rap song.
by mistake i posted it in misc poetry english category.
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«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2012, 11:54:41 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: May 17, 2012, 12:12:28 PM »
In this world
We are all screwed
We dont have fresh food
And We just intrude
Behave like shrewd

In this world
We dont have lifes
Just look for ideal wives
Want to eat apple
But all we have are blunt knives

We have no side though
Roads are open wide so,
All ways are tried
Now You want some peace
Even the Dove is fried

See Everybody fights
They Lost their sights
No longer flying kites
Only dark days
and haunted nights

We have to stop this
Before it give us final hit
Find what we had missed
But on the top of it
Just cut the crap shit

It Definetely Suit's a Rapper..

Good One  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Iftakhar Ahmad
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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2012, 07:37:30 PM »
Wow, lovely, amazing.
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akashsharma1990
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«Reply #7 on: May 18, 2012, 07:50:10 PM »
Wow, lovely, amazing.
Thank you
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akashsharma1990
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«Reply #8 on: May 18, 2012, 07:51:07 PM »
ApplauseApplause
Dhnyawaad
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«Reply #9 on: May 19, 2012, 09:27:34 PM »
The english is quite 'fried' in places. But knowing its for a rap song ....anyways!!! I hope its not the tune you posted earlier. I kinda liked that. Esp the electric organ bit.
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«Reply #10 on: May 20, 2012, 07:39:15 AM »
The english is quite 'fried' in places. But knowing its for a rap song ....anyways!!! I hope its not the tune you posted earlier. I kinda liked that. Esp the electric organ bit.
Thank you sir...
That is different and this is dfferent.
Thnx for liking the tone....
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