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Roja

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*Dead Existence*

« on: April 12, 2008, 03:25:49 PM »

An evening, when azimuth
Slowly turned orange
"My presence hardly matters",
You said to me..

At that moment,
I had no words to reply
As time went by
Two segments of life
One with you
One without you
Insisted my soul to
Define, My existence

Memories came flashing
Feeling of tender touches
The care to take right step
While walking a crisscross
Covering each other.
From heavy rains.
From heat of the day.
And from long dark nights
Of bitter quarrel

These things have vanished
My presence without you
Is life with Dead Existence...!!
(Mine)


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No Me No Love

Ricky

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Re: *Dead Existence*

« Reply #1 on: April 12, 2008, 03:43:35 PM »

Effective presentation of thoughts. I am not much into english poetry but still it was good to read. Good effort.


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Re: *Dead Existence*

« Reply #2 on: April 12, 2008, 07:09:56 PM »

wonderful roja ... keep writing such wonderful poems


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baadal102

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Re: *Dead Existence*

« Reply #3 on: April 13, 2008, 11:33:53 AM »

good job roja

Baadal


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Mujhe pad.ne walo mujhe yaad bhi rakhna,
Tut jaaye kalam cha.he lakin,
Dil main jageh kam na karna.......

Prateek Mardia

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Re: *Dead Existence*

« Reply #4 on: April 13, 2008, 12:51:54 PM »

roja ji,

very touching and very well written.


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diya786

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life is too short for hatred luv all

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Re: *Dead Existence*

« Reply #5 on: April 14, 2008, 03:06:57 AM »

very nice words to express innermost thoughts
really very impressive


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PATHAR MUJHE KEHTA HAI MERA CHAHNE WALA
MAIN MOOM HOON ...
USNE MUJHE CHU KAR NAHIN DEKHA

honeyrose

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Re: *Dead Existence*

« Reply #6 on: April 14, 2008, 03:10:50 AM »

Very nice lines Roja dear.. Usual Smile


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jo khushi nahi mili uske gam behisaabthey..
tha samander apna firbhikyu pyase they
hum ek hi baat main chupe kayi hijaab they

no_good_stranger

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Re: *Dead Existence*

« Reply #7 on: April 14, 2008, 06:07:32 AM »

breaking up is never easy,but its harder when you feel that no matter how much you put in,you are made to feel that your existence,the bond,the time,the surpport is all worthless.
Very well written


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