DREAM.................(ambu)

by ambalika sharma on September 19, 2013, 02:38:40 AM
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DREAM

 Swinging
When I was small,
And I used to play with dolls.
I keep on having a dream,
Dat one boy has come,
 Hats off to you!
As bright as sun,
Wearing dress so sweet,
He kindly me greets
He holds my hand
& for me he sang,
 angel13
U R MY GIRL.NO ONE LIKE YOU IN THS WORLD.PLEASE BE MINE.MAKE MY WORLD SHINE.U R SO PREETY.MOST BEAUTIFUL SWEETY.I LOVE YOU”.

But with time I grew up,
I came to know neither I am preety.
Nor my face so glow. sad5
The world was full of preety girls,
There was no one to see me,
No one to hold.
I was not so beautiful,not I was so smart,
All my dreams from me depart.

I understood dreams are dreams,
Now my heart just screams.
I would never find who would say, “U R ALL JUST MINE”.
I learned to be alone, sad11
May be in next life,I get my love,
  I may be beautiful,as precious as pearl.
   I wish……………….I just can wish……….. icon_flower
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«Reply #1 on: September 19, 2013, 02:55:36 AM »
DREAM

When I was small,
And I used to play with dolls.
I keep on having a dream,
Dat one boy has come,
 Hats off to you!
As bright as sun,
Wearing dress so sweet,
He kindly me greets
He holds my hand
& for me he sang,
 angel13
U R MY GIRL.NO ONE LIKE YOU IN THS WORLD.PLEASE BE MINE.MAKE MY WORLD SHINE.U R SO PREETY.MOST BEAUTIFUL SWEETY.I LOVE YOU”.
But with time I grew up,
I came to know neither I am preety.
Nor my face so glow.
The world was full of preety girls,
There was no one to see me,
No one to hold.
I was not so beautiful,not I was so smart,
All my dreams from me depart.
I understood dreams are dreams,
Now my heart just screams.
I would never find who would say, “U R ALL JUST MINE”.
I learned to be alone,
May be in next life,I get my love,
I may be beautiful,as precious as pearl.
I wish……………….I just can wish………..
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nice poem ambalika but dreams come true with positive approach.beauty never last longer  only the good deeds are remembered so don,t give up your self like that ............. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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ambalika sharma
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«Reply #2 on: September 19, 2013, 02:58:03 AM »
thank you.actually i have written this poem on behalf of all those girls who feel like that..................
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Advo.RavinderaRavi
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«Reply #3 on: September 19, 2013, 03:00:12 AM »
Nice Work Ambalika Sharmaji.
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ambalika sharma
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«Reply #4 on: September 19, 2013, 03:03:31 AM »
thank you
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Bhupinder Kaur
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«Reply #5 on: September 19, 2013, 03:04:29 AM »
Nice Creation
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ambalika sharma
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«Reply #6 on: September 19, 2013, 03:07:51 AM »
thank you bhupinder
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nashwani
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«Reply #7 on: September 19, 2013, 03:41:31 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

very nice ambalika jee..happy9
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Dineshkumarjonty
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«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2013, 08:27:27 AM »
Duniya main na to deewano ki kami hai na paglo ki
beautyful girl ab tumse bhi takraye to bahut honge.
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«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2013, 08:42:56 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #10 on: September 19, 2013, 09:12:32 AM »
waah waah
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ambalika sharma
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«Reply #11 on: September 19, 2013, 10:26:39 AM »
thank u
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Advo.RavinderaRavi
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«Reply #12 on: September 19, 2013, 12:19:58 PM »
You'er Welcomeji.
thank you
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premdeep
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«Reply #13 on: September 19, 2013, 01:14:33 PM »
thank you.actually i have written this poem on behalf of all those girls who feel like that..................
ohh i think this is ur feelings...very nicee work but i think poet should express his feelings in his creation no one is beautiful in this world and no one is ugly that depends on our thinking only.. i hope u understand ambu..
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«Reply #14 on: September 19, 2013, 01:50:41 PM »
Lovely dear
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