i saw a girl _______________ ROY

by roy on December 12, 2012, 11:12:53 AM
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    I saw a girl



I saw a girl

I saw her face

I saw her eyes

I saw her smileeeee……..


I don’t noe wat was hapenin

I don’t noe wat was going through my mind

But there was some magic in her eyes

N wid her smile ,

..........she made it devineeeee…......


I was lyk , baybii um hea

Wat r uh watin for dea


U just hav too say ,
 I love uh ,

 from d bottom of ur heart,

N i'll beeeee right dea wea uh r……
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«Reply #1 on: December 12, 2012, 11:20:00 AM »
nice feelings which somehow I understood,  sorry to say that lots of spelling mistake are there which needs to be corrected.
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«Reply #2 on: December 12, 2012, 11:26:23 AM »
Quote from: prashad on December 12, 2012, 11:20:00 AM
nice feelings which somehow I understood,  sorry to say that lots of spelling mistake are there which needs to be corrected.

than-q sir ...
n vo spelling mistakes intentional hai sir g
hehehehehheheeeee

so that while reading the other person could catch d accent ... tongue3 tongue3
hehehhee
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«Reply #3 on: December 12, 2012, 11:28:44 AM »
Quote from: roy on December 12, 2012, 11:12:53 AM
    I saw a girl



I saw a girl

I saw her face

I saw her eyes

I saw her smileeeee……..


I don’t noe wat was hapenin

I don’t noe wat was going through my mind

But there was some magic in her eyes

N wid her smile ,

..........she made it devineeeee…......


I was lyk , baybii um hea

Wat r uh watin for dea


U just hav too say ,
 I love uh ,

 from d bottom of ur heart,

N i'll beeeee right dea wea uh r……




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«Reply #4 on: December 12, 2012, 11:35:35 AM »
Quote from: roy on December 12, 2012, 11:12:53 AM
    I saw a girl



I saw a girl

I saw her face

I saw her eyes

I saw her smileeeee……..


I don’t noe wat was hapenin

I don’t noe wat was going through my mind

But there was some magic in her eyes

N wid her smile ,

..........she made it devineeeee…......


I was lyk , baybii um hea

Wat r uh watin for dea


U just hav too say ,
 I love uh ,

 from d bottom of ur heart,

N i'll beeeee right dea wea uh r……


Mr Roy shuruat mein yeh haal hai to aage kya hoga..
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«Reply #5 on: December 12, 2012, 11:44:00 AM »
beautiful feelings
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«Reply #6 on: December 12, 2012, 11:56:37 AM »
Bahut khoob Roy jee
beautiful thoughts
n nice expression

lagta hai naam mil gaya aapko.
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«Reply #7 on: December 12, 2012, 12:23:47 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: December 12, 2012, 12:31:15 PM »
mast hai yaar... i liked d way u wrote it...  mast creation
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«Reply #9 on: December 12, 2012, 01:59:42 PM »
Quote from: qalb on December 12, 2012, 11:28:44 AM

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shukriya qalb g
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«Reply #10 on: December 12, 2012, 02:00:28 PM »
I must say, a very good effort and nice work. Hope to see more and better work from you.
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«Reply #11 on: December 12, 2012, 02:01:47 PM »
Quote from: sahal on December 12, 2012, 11:35:35 AM
Mr Roy shuruat mein yeh haal hai to aage kya hoga..
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than-q
lol sahal bhai actually ye mera bohot purana song tha jo maine use pehli bar dekhne pe gun-gunaya tha
aaj bohot waqt baad yad aya :D

abhi thoda incomplete hai .. pura yaad ni aaya :/
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«Reply #12 on: December 12, 2012, 02:02:55 PM »
Quote from: aqsh on December 12, 2012, 11:44:00 AM
beautiful feelings
than-x  Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: December 12, 2012, 02:04:09 PM »
Quote from: mkv on December 12, 2012, 11:56:37 AM
Bahut khoob Roy jee
beautiful thoughts
n nice expression

lagta hai naam mil gaya aapko.
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bohot bohot shukriya mukesh bhai aapka ...

nd   haan aab to aap sabki help se bohot sare names mil gaye final karna baki hai occasion17
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«Reply #14 on: December 12, 2012, 02:05:22 PM »
than-x alot SAINI SIR.. n CIC sir .... Usual Smile Usual Smile
um glad that u liked it ....
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