I wish, I could.

by myheart_ursonly on March 19, 2005, 11:44:38 PM
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I wish, I Could - Amit

I knew that you were made for me,
right from the first day I met you.
I promise, my love will never fade,
my love for you will always be true.

Every time you think of something,
I hope you can feel my love there.
coz' in all the things that I do,
I've exactly the same feeling here.

I wish I could show you how it feels,
I long every second to be with you.
I feel so lonely during the nights,
It's so hard to live without you.

I wish for the day you'll be mine,
when no one can take you way.
My lips worship the God above,
and my hands are joined in his pray.

I wish I could fly to your place,
even if I could see you for just an hour.
I wish I could hold you in my arms,
If somehow, God grants me that power.


Critique type comments are also welcome.
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nikki
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«Reply #1 on: March 19, 2005, 11:56:29 PM »
waoooooo.....hearty...fantastic..
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sanya310
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«Reply #2 on: March 20, 2005, 12:11:46 AM »
a very sweet wish...and a loving dedication...
bas title mein ki spelling theek kar do..from cound to could Usual Smile touching poem..good work once again
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #3 on: March 20, 2005, 03:40:24 AM »
Thanks Nikki, Sanya.
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nishita
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2005, 11:07:52 AM »
nice amit
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #5 on: March 20, 2005, 11:50:08 AM »
Thanks Nishita.
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Princess21
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«Reply #6 on: March 26, 2005, 06:34:25 AM »
BUhat niceee HEart!~
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #7 on: March 26, 2005, 08:11:21 AM »
i wish i could
forget you.
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #8 on: March 26, 2005, 05:56:22 PM »
thanks neha yaar

fakhar tum chup raho... m
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e

t
hread mein aake pata nahi kya kya likhte ho

:mad:
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