illusion

by akashsharma1990 on May 21, 2012, 04:21:56 PM
Pages: [1]
Print
Author  (Read 1013 times)
akashsharma1990
Guest
This is a kuch bhi poem.Was not feeling good to aise hi likh di.
Hope pasand aaye aap sabko.
And plz check out my poem hope is all we got.
Here is the link: http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/english/hope-is-all-we-got-t75072.0.html
................................................. ................................................. ................................................. ......................

 Sitting under moon and stars
Heart full of pain and scars.
Eyes full of revenge and anger
Walking alone and met a stranger
Never know whats going to happen
Tears in eyes somebody stop them
With stranger I started walking
And There was no end to talking
We moved very far away
Unaware is it night or day
Time passes by like a jet
No introduction upto yet
No hunger no thirst i feel
Pain in heart started to heel
Tears have changed into smile
And we covered unknown miles
But realize there was no one with me
again my heart started crying.
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
Optical illusion by Meena in SMS , mobile & JOKES « 1 2 ... 7 8 »
illusion....!!!! by yahiya in Miscellaneous Shayri
False illusion about success by @kaash in Inspirational Stories and real life Incidences.
akashsharma1990
Guest
«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2012, 04:26:33 PM »
This is a kuch bhi poem.Was not feeling good to aise hi likh di.
Hope pasand aaye aap sabko.
And plz check out my poem hope is all we got.
Here is the link: http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/english/hope-is-all-we-got-t75072.0.html
................................................. ................................................. ................................................. ......................

Sitting under moon and stars
Heart full of pain and scars.
Eyes full of revenge and anger
Walking alone and met a stranger
Never know whats going to happen
Tears in eyes somebody stop them
With stranger I started walking
And There was no end to talking
We moved very far away
Unaware is it night or day
Time passes by like a jet
No introduction upto yet
No hunger no thirst i feel
Pain in heart started to heel
Tears have changed into smile
And we covered unknown miles
But realize there was no one with me
again my heart started crying.
Logged
mkv
Guest
«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2012, 04:34:36 PM »
Bahut khoob Akash jee
illusion...i'm dreaming,,wow,,what an end..
beautiful..beautiful..Applause
Logged
sksaini4
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 853
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011


View Profile
«Reply #3 on: May 22, 2012, 03:22:38 AM »
good
Logged
dolly
Guest
«Reply #4 on: May 22, 2012, 06:05:42 AM »
ultimate truth...walk alone...
verry nyyc
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
Logged
mazHur
Guest
«Reply #5 on: May 22, 2012, 07:29:25 PM »
very nice!!
Logged
soudagar
Guest
«Reply #6 on: May 23, 2012, 03:34:08 AM »
bahut khub janab
Logged
khwahish
WeCare
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 166
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
272 days, 5 hours and 50 minutes.

Posts: 11814
Member Since: Sep 2006


View Profile
«Reply #7 on: May 26, 2012, 03:11:00 PM »
This is a kuch bhi poem.Was not feeling good to aise hi likh di.
Hope pasand aaye aap sabko.
And plz check out my poem hope is all we got.
Here is the link: http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/english/hope-is-all-we-got-t75072.0.html
...

 Sitting under moon and stars
Heart full of pain and scars.
Eyes full of revenge and anger
Walking alone and met a stranger
Never know whats going to happen
Tears in eyes somebody stop them
With stranger I started walking
And There was no end to talking
We moved very far away
Unaware is it night or day
Time passes by like a jet
No introduction upto yet
No hunger no thirst i feel
Pain in heart started to heel
Tears have changed into smile
And we covered unknown miles
But realize there was no one with me
again my heart started crying.


Aapne To Isse Kuch Bhi poem Ka Naam De Diya But This Poem Is Worth a Read....

Beautiful!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
akashsharma1990
Guest
«Reply #8 on: May 26, 2012, 06:15:18 PM »
@khwaish mujhe laga nhi tha ki mujhe itna aacha response milega.
Aage se kabhi apne aap underestimate nhi karunga.
Dhnyawaad all for the appreciation:-)
Logged
BANSI DHAMEJA
Guest
«Reply #9 on: June 05, 2012, 10:21:50 AM »
dard ko barhe achhe se bayn kiya hai. bahut khoob
Logged
Pages: [1]
Print
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
April 19, 2024, 05:59:32 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[April 04, 2024, 04:49:28 PM]

[April 02, 2024, 12:27:12 PM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:34:54 AM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:30:44 AM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:26:39 AM]

by ASIF
[March 23, 2024, 08:50:46 AM]

[March 21, 2024, 07:59:38 PM]

[March 17, 2024, 02:01:29 PM]

[March 16, 2024, 03:26:05 PM]

[March 16, 2024, 03:25:04 PM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.114 seconds with 26 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8498 Real Poets and poetry admirer