**I'm back alone**

by dead heart on May 07, 2009, 11:20:02 AM
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I dearly apologise for the length of the poem...

I'm back alone,
after a disastrous relationship,
my heart is finally shattered finally to never rebound,
ia m all alone left with a shattered broken heart...

loneliness killing me,
day by day the silent pain inside me kills the courage and self esteem,
pain inside me which has no medicine,
pain that is a soft painful silent killer...

why should i suffer?Huh?
the betrayer will be destroyed too,
she will beg too,
for the love she needs and de love i gave her...

i wasn't the betrayer,
shattering my torn heart appeared as fun to her,
but to me it was only one thing,
disgrace and pain...

i showed her the love perhaps she neva deserved,
i really loved her,
the pain i got was deserved by me,
because of my mistake of ashaming love by showing it to a betrayer and insulting it...

love is essentially another synonym of sorrow and pain,
she proved that statement rite,
love is the need of a dying object wen it wants life,
love is the lust a thirty person has for water...

love is not the lust for the body,
but it is the lust for the soul,
love isn't just an attraction between two creatures,
but it is the dirst that is alike in two hearts...

love is undefined,
undescribable,
but for the pain she gave me is definite,
it is immense and heart felt...


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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2009, 11:22:07 AM »
the tears i shed are just too painful,
they got out the love i had for her,
they left one thing in me for the world,
hatred and anger...

the tears came out showing just how much i loved her,
but they also showed just how much she played me,
they also show just how much the pain was she gave me,
the love i gave her became meaningless after she rejected it...

nothing was left for me to say,
after her rejection to my love that took over my soul,
she new thats the strongest part of my body,
she targeted the soul after shattering my heart...

she is a clever player,
she shattered my heart,
but wasn't successful enough to eliminate my soul from my body and break me down,
she will never do that as well as there is a better player on top of another one always...

whatever she did was for herself,
i don't blame her,
but whatever i did for her,
was like a lesson to me so that i never commit the mistake again...

but love is a mistake,
one has to repeat again and again,
it is part of life,
and one object has control over it; the heart...

i am back alone,
on that very dark life i started with,
i am not annoyed with what she did,
i blame myself for all this and most of all my fate...

i am back.
the destroyers mind is again in progress.
i don't want to break others as she broke me,
but she has certainly left me with no feelings forcing me to be the devil again...

life has opted that for me,
i will give it what it wants,
the love i had for her shall never back again,
but the pain she gave me shall always be remembered as a broken shattered heart and the scar seen on the broken pieces of my heart...
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«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2009, 12:03:55 PM »
Dead Heart Ji Aapki Iss Creation ko padne ke baad mere pass koi lafz hi nahi hai ki mein taarif karoo.n, sach me bahut bahut bahut hi khoosurat likha hai aapne...

It's Mindblowing, Fabouless, & Many More... Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2009, 12:10:13 PM »
 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy Thanks alot Shally jee...I thought the poem wouldn't be read because of its length but great that atleast someone really liked it...Thanks alot!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 07, 2009, 12:13:41 PM »
notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy Thanks alot Shally jee...I thought the poem wouldn't be read because of its length but great that atleast someone really liked it...Thanks alot!!!!

My plzure DH Ji, U know length dosn't matter, the main thing is words & really ur words touched my heart...

Shally.
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«Reply #5 on: May 07, 2009, 12:20:29 PM »
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley great post too awesome heart ji ...amazingly written..   
Thanks alot Kaash jee..
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«Reply #6 on: May 07, 2009, 12:21:19 PM »
rahim bro excellent wrk... really i can feel the pain....well versed Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: May 07, 2009, 12:29:37 PM »
My plzure DH Ji, U know length dosn't matter, the main thing is words & really ur words touched my heart...

Shally.
Thanks alot Shally jee...I'm glad my poem reached where it was supposed to do so...
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«Reply #8 on: May 07, 2009, 12:34:43 PM »
rahim bro excellent wrk... really i can feel the pain....well versed Clapping Smiley
Thanks bro...
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«Reply #9 on: May 07, 2009, 01:47:35 PM »
dh ji,kya khoob likha aap ne.very nice.
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«Reply #10 on: May 07, 2009, 01:53:36 PM »
Nice hold on the whole concept... not a single line broke the meaning... Nice work Heart ji!
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«Reply #11 on: May 07, 2009, 02:52:19 PM »
dh ji,kya khoob likha aap ne.very nice.
Nice hold on the whole concept... not a single line broke the meaning... Nice work Heart ji!
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Madhuwesh jee aur Salma di...
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«Reply #12 on: May 07, 2009, 03:10:57 PM »
I dearly apologise for the length of the poem...

I'm back alone,
after a disastrous relationship,
my heart is finally shattered finally to never rebound,
ia m all alone left with a shattered broken heart...

loneliness killing me,
day by day the silent pain inside me kills the courage and self esteem,
pain inside me which has no medicine,
pain that is a soft painful silent killer...

why should i suffer?Huh?
the betrayer will be destroyed too,
she will beg too,
for the love she needs and de love i gave her...

i wasn't the betrayer,
shattering my torn heart appeared as fun to her,
but to me it was only one thing,
disgrace and pain...

i showed her the love perhaps she neva deserved,
i really loved her,
the pain i got was deserved by me,
because of my mistake of ashaming love by showing it to a betrayer and insulting it...

love is essentially another synonym of sorrow and pain,
she proved that statement rite,
love is the need of a dying object wen it wants life,
love is the lust a thirty person has for water...

love is not the lust for the body,
but it is the lust for the soul,
love isn't just an attraction between two creatures,
but it is the dirst that is alike in two hearts...

love is undefined,
undescribable,
but for the pain she gave me is definite,
it is immense and heart felt...
 
LOVE IZ STILL UNDEFINED IT IZ ACTUALLY A PERCEPTION AND VARIES FROM PERSON 2 PERSON AS I BELIEVE......ANYWAYS A NAAICE POEM...DH


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«Reply #13 on: May 07, 2009, 03:22:28 PM »

Thanks bro
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«Reply #14 on: May 07, 2009, 03:29:06 PM »
Wah DH kya kamal ka likhte ho yaar. man karta hai kho jao usme. Too good yaar.
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