I’m dying for your love: come on!

by abdbundeli on August 08, 2008, 11:50:10 AM
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I’m dying for your love: come on!

Those heights of hills: are known for shades:
As if, for lovers are they made!
Their roomy groves: furnished with grass,
Are soft and silky; neatly laid!!
         Let’s climb together, hand-in-hand!
               I’m dying for your love: come on!!

What, if the sky is so over-cast?
What, if the wind is blowing so fast?
What, if the showers, catch us up?
What, if the expanse is, just, too vast?
   If it’s too steep; we’ll take that bend!
          I’m dying for your love: come on !!

Look: birds are flying forth, and gliding!
They‘re speeding quietly down, sliding!
They’re moving fast for their nests, now:
As if, all directions are guiding!
   Let’s, on their directions, depend!
      I’m dying for your love: come on!!

That’s, quite a lonely, peaceful, place:
Where, we’ll find ourselves, face-to-face!
Our privacies: shall be intact;
And, there shall be, in love, a grace!
   We’ll be ourselves: none else to tend!!
      I’m dying for your love:  come on!!
                       ••••
                                   - G.R.Prakash      
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: October 10, 2009, 08:12:58 AM »
Wah wah Abd ji,bahut bahut khoob,lovely n mindblowing creation,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #2 on: October 11, 2009, 08:02:48 AM »
Wah wah Abd ji,bahut bahut khoob,lovely n mindblowing creation,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks a lot, Madhu!
               - abd bundeli
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Roja
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«Reply #3 on: October 23, 2009, 02:54:09 AM »
I’m dying for your love: come on!

Those heights of hills: are known for shades:
As if, for lovers are they made!
Their roomy groves: furnished with grass,
Are soft and silky; neatly laid!!
         Let’s climb together, hand-in-hand!
               I’m dying for your love: come on!!

What, if the sky is so over-cast?
What, if the wind is blowing so fast?
What, if the showers, catch us up?
What, if the expanse is, just, too vast?
   If it’s too steep; we’ll take that bend!
          I’m dying for your love: come on !!

Look: birds are flying forth, and gliding!
They‘re speeding quietly down, sliding!
They’re moving fast for their nests, now:
As if, all directions are guiding!
   Let’s, on their directions, depend!
      I’m dying for your love: come on!!

That’s, quite a lonely, peaceful, place:
Where, we’ll find ourselves, face-to-face!
Our privacies: shall be intact;
And, there shall be, in love, a grace!
   We’ll be ourselves: none else to tend!!
      I’m dying for your love:  come on!!
                       ••••
                                   - G.R.Prakash     


Woooow Uncle ji... It is very romantic and lovely creation... I am dying to read you more  Applause Applause
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #4 on: October 24, 2009, 04:28:23 PM »

Woooow Uncle ji... It is very romantic and lovely creation... I am dying to read you more  Applause Applause

Thanks Roja! You're welcome!
                - abd bundeli
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #5 on: October 24, 2009, 04:38:51 PM »
I’m dying for your love: come on!

Those heights of hills: are known for shades:
As if, for lovers are they made!
Their roomy groves: furnished with grass,
Are soft and silky; neatly laid!!
         Let’s climb together, hand-in-hand!
               I’m dying for your love: come on!!

What, if the sky is so over-cast?
What, if the wind is blowing so fast?
What, if the showers, catch us up?
What, if the expanse is, just, too vast?
   If it’s too steep; we’ll take that bend!
          I’m dying for your love: come on !!

Look: birds are flying forth, and gliding!
They‘re speeding quietly down, sliding!
They’re moving fast for their nests, now:
As if, all directions are guiding!
   Let’s, on their directions, depend!
      I’m dying for your love: come on!!

That’s, quite a lonely, peaceful, place:
Where, we’ll find ourselves, face-to-face!
Our privacies: shall be intact;
And, there shall be, in love, a grace!
   We’ll be ourselves: none else to tend!!
      I’m dying for your love:  come on!!
                       ••••
                                   - G.R.Prakash     


Wow what a beautiful creation Abd ji.. Really very touching..
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cara
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«Reply #6 on: October 24, 2009, 04:52:47 PM »
WAH KYA BAAT HAI  ABD JI......

COME ON HAND IN HAND IN THE NATURES LAND
WHERE OUR LOVE WILL ONLY GROW,NEVER END.
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #7 on: October 24, 2009, 05:05:19 PM »
Wow what a beautiful creation Abd ji.. Really very touching..
Thanks Sophi! I wrote it long-long ago, when a youthful heart also vibrated somewhere into my mind incessantly!
            - G.R.Prakash
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #8 on: October 24, 2009, 05:14:54 PM »
WAH KYA BAAT HAI  ABD JI......

COME ON HAND IN HAND IN THE NATURES LAND
WHERE OUR LOVE WILL ONLY GROW,NEVER END.

Thanks, Cara!

If it could have been endless, my dear friend!
But, oh, it's now there, where no one can mend!!

                         - G.R.Prakash
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