Let The Time Take Sometime

by Neepobithi on November 09, 2009, 06:56:36 AM
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Neepobithi
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 Let the time to take sometime
              To Burry me in the past
Long after I cease to talk
              And convert to mere dust.


The thought that perspired
              Trough exertion and pain
may etch thr space of time
              And reverberate in memory lane.

Eventually the new genre
              obliterete the old morn,
All my thoughts will rest
              In the lap of oblivion.

Rebirth is is a thing to debate
               Though eternal is the soul
Let the time take sometime,
                prior it sucks me in its black hole.

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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: November 09, 2009, 07:19:10 AM »
Very nice and touching creation Neepo ji.great work.keep it up. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #2 on: November 09, 2009, 07:20:37 AM »
Nice Creation Applause and Welcom In Yoindia
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Neepobithi
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«Reply #3 on: November 13, 2009, 06:19:50 AM »
Thank you Madhuweshji for your comment. It is quite boosting.
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Neepobithi
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«Reply #4 on: November 13, 2009, 06:21:51 AM »
Thank you rishiji for your encouraging comment.
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