Life's Race

by fatima anam on May 11, 2010, 12:21:36 PM
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Life's race,
Needs a great pace,
One has to run,
From just pleasure and fun.

The cycle of exams goes on and on,
As pass the days from dusk to dawn.

Studies, education, a great burden they add,
To our little life, where we are neither happy nor glad.

For jobs, money, we have to sacrifice a lot,
And then life's pressure makes us hot.

Life's never ending race makes life miserable,
With some moments really unbearable.

One day this race,
At the death's face,
Will be discontinued,
Leaving behind, the past experiences, sights which once we have viewed.

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«Reply #1 on: May 11, 2010, 12:36:59 PM »
dear anam its the first time that i  come across with ur beautiful creation,,its really touching , really a hidden truth .. wonderful keep writing ..


may allah always keeps you happy and  protect u ..

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«Reply #2 on: May 11, 2010, 12:38:45 PM »
buhat khoob.. fatima anam jee

its not that difficult to go that deep into the sea... but difficult to survive..

itna deeply life ko dekhna... or ghor karna... is never recommended.. but may be you can bear it..

all i had to say is... that was very nice..
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«Reply #3 on: May 11, 2010, 01:09:44 PM »
Very nice indeed Fatima Ji
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«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2010, 03:45:10 AM »
dear anam its the first time that i  come across with ur beautiful creation,,its really touching , really a hidden truth .. wonderful keep writing ..


may allah always keeps you happy and  protect u ..

qadeertoopchi

thanks a lot Qadeer bhai for reading my poem and posting your valuable comment.. icon_flower
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«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2010, 03:46:49 AM »
buhat khoob.. fatima anam jee

its not that difficult to go that deep into the sea... but difficult to survive..

itna deeply life ko dekhna... or ghor karna... is never recommended.. but may be you can bear it..

all i had to say is... that was very nice..



thanks a lot vb brother... icon_flower
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«Reply #6 on: May 12, 2010, 03:48:08 AM »
Very nice indeed Fatima Ji


shukriya Rajesh bhai for your reply.... icon_flower
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