:: love poems by me : please comment ::

by myheart_ursonly on January 16, 2005, 05:29:36 PM
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myheart_ursonly
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Hello! everyone.

Here are a few love poems by me, I'd like to share with you.
I need your suggestions.
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #1 on: January 16, 2005, 05:32:23 PM »
"a second without you"- amit, verma_amit_4u@yahoo.com

when i fell in love with you, i never knew,
its so hard to live a second without you!
like i said before, i have nothing more to say
i'll love you *****, every second and everyday.
i miss you, and i miss you like a mad,
may all my joy is yours, i can never see you sad...
like the moon, the sun and the sky,
hold my hand sweetheart, together we will fly.
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yogi
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«Reply #2 on: January 16, 2005, 05:59:38 PM »
good one lucky ho yaar sacha baar kismat se milta hai
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #3 on: January 16, 2005, 09:00:11 PM »
Usual Smile  Thanks for your kind thoughts Yogi.

I am not good at writing love poems,
it was my first effort, with which i was satisfied!
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Princess21
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«Reply #4 on: January 17, 2005, 03:21:36 AM »
buhat acha likha hai heart
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #5 on: January 17, 2005, 06:20:48 AM »
Quote from: "Princess21"
buhat acha likha hai heart


Thanks Princess.  Usual Smile
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dhadkan
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«Reply #6 on: January 17, 2005, 06:33:20 AM »
hey HEART ur poem has really taken away my heart
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #7 on: January 17, 2005, 06:45:45 AM »
hmmmmm...... thnx dhadkan!

ur avatar perfectly suits your id, dhadkan... heartbeat! Usual Smile
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dhadkan
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«Reply #8 on: January 17, 2005, 06:54:04 AM »
Thanx Heart do keep writing such poems :lol:  :lol:
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jindagi
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«Reply #9 on: January 17, 2005, 07:32:43 AM »
very nice heart
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cutepriya_delhi
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«Reply #10 on: January 17, 2005, 08:11:52 AM »
awwwwe such a goody goody poem. i really liked it!

jaroor kisi kismat wali ke liye hogi Usual Smile kyun heart? sahi kaha na maine?


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Priya
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tarav
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«Reply #11 on: January 17, 2005, 09:10:23 AM »
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
Hello! everyone.

Here are a few love poems by me, I'd like to share with you.
I need your suggestions.
lovable lines!!!!..dil me jajbaton saa,,..sapno me khayalon ki tarah,,....hamne chaha hai tumhe chahne walon ki tarah!!..
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #12 on: January 17, 2005, 09:50:20 AM »
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very nice heart


Thank you Jindagi.

Jindagi?  Puzzled !  Nice ID/Name!
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Princess21
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«Reply #13 on: January 17, 2005, 09:51:43 AM »
heart............hehe
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #14 on: January 17, 2005, 09:52:42 AM »
Quote from: "cutepriya_delhi"
awwwwe such a goody goody poem. i really liked it!

jaroor kisi kismat wali ke liye hogi Usual Smile kyun heart? sahi kaha na maine?


------
Priya


hmmm..... sahi kaha! kismat wali to hai.... aur thodi si pagli bhi, meri tareh.  Puzzled !
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