Love

by Apra on June 22, 2012, 07:13:30 PM
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Whenever meet me,
Please meet me with a SMILe,
All the sorrows of your life,
Passes away for a mile.....


My strong desire to meet you now,
Tell me please me where and how,
Meet me as soon as possible,
otherwise my life will be in trouble....


Whenever I an alone,
Your memories flashed into my mind,
I feel pleasure to remember,
Those lovely moments of many kind......


You are so nice,
But you don't know,
You are my choice,
But you don't know,
I Love you,
But you don't know,
Perhaps, you also love me,
But i don't know.......... notworthy
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roy
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«Reply #1 on: June 22, 2012, 07:27:06 PM »
very beautiful
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please correct ur mistake in 2nd stanza 2nd line u have written ME 2wise tongue3 tongue3

anyhow it is a beautiful creation
keep posting
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«Reply #2 on: June 23, 2012, 01:45:23 AM »
nice
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«Reply #3 on: June 23, 2012, 02:49:18 AM »
very nice creation apra. hope to read you more
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«Reply #4 on: June 23, 2012, 03:03:54 AM »
Applause Applause
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janumanu
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«Reply #5 on: June 24, 2012, 11:56:56 AM »
Whenever meet me,
Please meet me with a SMILe,
All the sorrows of your life,
Passes away for a mile.....


My strong desire to meet you now,
Tell me please me where and how,
Meet me as soon as possible,
otherwise my life will be in trouble....


Whenever I an alone,
Your memories flashed into my mind,
I feel pleasure to remember,
Those lovely moments of many kind......


You are so nice,
But you don't know,
You are my choice,
But you don't know,
I Love you,
But you don't know,
Perhaps, you also love me,
But i don't know.......... notworthy

awesome ....

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