My love for you will never die...!!!

by Talat on February 18, 2007, 01:30:50 AM
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Talat
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In the moon lit night,
when everything seems quiet,
I lay in my bed,
thinking of you,
remembering each word,
that you ever said.

Beautiful memories
unfold in my mind,
the precious moments
make me smile.

My heart pounds fast
and my mind wanders off,
in the beautiful world
that just belongs to us.

Sitting quietly
on the shore of the sea,
everything vanishes
and its just you and me.

My head on your shoulders
as we hold hands together,
I close my eyes,
in these few moments
want to spend whole life.

As I open my eyes
my beautiful dream ends,
you are not with me
I am alone in my world.

Your smiling face
remains in my sight,
Holding back my tears,
I whisper Good Night !!!
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2007, 04:34:03 PM »
i did nt know this poem is not worth a single reply !!!!  very bad Talat, you should write better Puzzled !
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Shikha12
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«Reply #2 on: February 24, 2007, 04:51:19 PM »
Talat... I am so Sorry.. I went against your wishes to Lock this Topic.. And I hope you dont mind it.. Puzzled !

But you have written really very well.. Actually kuch reply samajh nahin aaya naa.. Is liye reply nahin kiya thaa.. Tumne itnaa achaa likh kar sabki boltii jo band kar  di  thii... Usual Smile

Really very nice.... Just Love your thoughts and your way of writing... =D> =D> =D>

And Talat, English Poetry mey to waise bhi kam replies aate hai...there are many poems over here without a single reply from last so many months... Don't be so sensitive... You are really a very good Poet... Usual Smile
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Rajbir
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«Reply #3 on: February 24, 2007, 05:09:41 PM »
Tallu

Very good poem yaar !

Sorry, kai sections mein aata nahi hoon. So don't mind Puzzled !
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: February 24, 2007, 05:24:57 PM »
Thank You Shikha and Rajbir......its very kind of you ! Usual Smile
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #5 on: February 26, 2007, 09:47:09 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"
In the moon lit night,
when everything seems quiet,
I lay in my bed,
thinking of you,
remembering each word,
that you ever said.

Beautiful memories
unfold in my mind,
the precious moments
make me smile.

My heart pounds fast
and my mind wanders off,
in the beautiful world
that just belongs to us.

Sitting quietly
on the shore of the sea,
everything vanishes
and its just you and me.

My head on your shoulders
as we hold hands together,
I close my eyes,
in these few moments
want to spend whole life.

As I open my eyes
my beautiful dream ends,
you are not with me
I am alone in my world.

Your smiling face
remains in my sight,
Holding back my tears,
I whisper Good Night !!!


Beautiful... Its shows ur feeling... Nice job talat sis
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #6 on: February 26, 2007, 10:29:44 AM »
Amazing Talat DIDI :wink: .....Appreciable Work.......!!!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: February 26, 2007, 05:01:09 PM »
Thanks a lot Divya..... Usual Smile .....................and Gaurav Puzzled !
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Talat
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«Reply #8 on: March 10, 2007, 10:13:06 PM »
I love the way you talk and smile
For you I can go that extra mile
I love you forever, for you I ll wait
Years will pass, I wont count the date
I am with you each moment of your life
Dont ever be said, dont ever you sigh
My smell you ll find in your air
Close your eyes, and i ll be there
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sanya310
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«Reply #9 on: March 10, 2007, 10:36:53 PM »
beautiful talat Usual Smile i love the way u put emotions in ur words so easily :D
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Talat
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«Reply #10 on: March 12, 2007, 12:04:01 AM »
Thanks so much Sanya... :D :D :D
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angel4u
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«Reply #11 on: April 13, 2007, 12:05:14 AM »
That was really great.
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Talat
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«Reply #12 on: September 15, 2007, 01:19:12 AM »
Thank You Angel Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #13 on: September 23, 2008, 01:08:37 AM »
Thankyou ! Yoindia
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