*She*:English

Roja

Guest

She sits alone in her lonely dwelling,
Dwelling upon her bygone days
In somber solitude quietly musing
A wan smile lingering over her face

Reminiscing fondly she looks all around
For some remnant of her glorious past
Ah! A tiny colourful ball on the ground
Lying snug, her little son had playfully cast

She peers over the photographs early
Nostalgic reminders wet her carving
Each moment etched in her mind fully
Fills her with an intense longing

Reigning supreme for thirty long years
With tender care, did she her children tend
And to assuage, day-to-day unfounded fears
Ever beside her, a supportive, doting husband

Her home vibrated once with the constant chatter
Of little ones and their lively mischievous gaiety
Or like monkeys, their excited innocent jabber
Their voices still echo, her nest dreadfully empty

Parted ways, one by one, all she held so dear
Remembering them, she weeps, in acute agony
A family of ten did she so lovingly rear
Bereft of family, in twilight years, a bitter irony


	Logged

honeyrose

Guest

Re: *She*

«Reply #1 on: March 09, 2008, 11:33:22 AM »

Wow lovely poem Roja.. Usual Smile

...


	Logged

punam

Guest

Re: *She*

«Reply #2 on: March 09, 2008, 11:39:04 AM »

Bahot acha likha roja di...


	Logged

jatti_80

Guest

Re: *She*

«Reply #3 on: March 09, 2008, 11:40:58 AM »

GREAT JOB


	Logged

Talat

Guest

Re: *She*

«Reply #4 on: March 09, 2008, 12:05:58 PM »

Very Good Work Roja Applause


	Logged

Roja

Guest

Re: *She*

«Reply #5 on: March 09, 2008, 12:15:29 PM »

Quote from: Talat on March 09, 2008, 12:05:58 PM

Very Good Work Roja Applause

Thanks Talat sis. Yeh mere Grandmaa k upper hai
maine kayi raat unko rote dekha hai. Mere papa
ke liye bahut baar raaton ko roya karti thi.


	Logged

baadal102

Guest

Re: *She*

«Reply #6 on: March 09, 2008, 02:59:59 PM »

wah kya baat hai roja ji Applause

Baadal


	Logged

harashmahajan

Guest

Re: *She*

«Reply #7 on: March 10, 2008, 03:08:31 AM »

Simply beautiful....things expressed so simply....impressive..........
Roja...I am here after a long time to share my thoughts ....Poetry is my life though......Each time we pen our thoughts our heart and mind is on display.....May my deep love for language be evident and satisfying or may be your mind to reject the sentiments generated....your captioned poem is the zist of your heart.. a lovely bunch of words... Excellent, I really enjoyed this ....a presentation of your mind about the subject......through your pen which is enormously bleeding blew......


	Logged

khwahish

WeCare
Khaas Shayar

Rau: 166

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
272 days, 5 hours and 50 minutes.

Posts: 11814
Member Since: Sep 2006

Re: *She*

«Reply #8 on: March 12, 2008, 06:54:15 AM »

great one roja..really too good.. Applause


	Logged

Pooja

Guest

Re: *She*

«Reply #9 on: March 14, 2008, 02:08:28 PM »

Good job dear!!!


	Logged

Roja

Guest

Re: *She*

«Reply #10 on: March 15, 2008, 04:30:44 PM »

Thank you very much Honey, Punam, Jatti ji, Baadal ji, Shrimaan Harash ji
Khwaish ji and pooja di..... Thank you very much for the appreciation.


	Logged

no_good_stranger

Guest

Re: *She*

«Reply #11 on: May 01, 2008, 08:03:02 AM »

Brilliant work,really excellent


	Logged

Roja

Guest

Re: *She*

«Reply #12 on: November 08, 2009, 04:16:18 AM »

Quote from: no_good_stranger on May 01, 2008, 08:03:02 AM

Brilliant work,really excellent

Thanks stranger.. Where u r? Miss your comments


	Logged

madhuwesh

Guest

Re: *She*

«Reply #13 on: November 09, 2009, 05:04:53 AM »

Wah Roja ji lovely creation,bahut hi khoob,beautiful lines by HM ji.excellent icon_thumleft


	Logged

Pages: [1]

Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shayri-E-Dard > English > Topic: *She*