The moments we share!!!!

by BeNam on January 29, 2006, 01:01:47 PM
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BeNam
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Moment we met I knew it was just you,
My heart sensed it & just turned it so true!

I remember the sight of you,
You just panitrated straight through!

Life just began to look good,
Changing my every days mood!

I just happen to think of only you,
Nothing else mattered for just a feel of you!

Then came the moment, we just got along so well,
Nothing can be so precious; I felt like found a jwel!

The tender touch of your lips and the warmth of your breath,
Just made me crazy, promise me you be mine even after death!

We Shared moments of joy and sorrow together,
Its been time we have been so close and will be forever!

Everyday I cherish the moments I have spent with you,
And remember the person who made my dreams come true!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #1 on: January 29, 2006, 02:10:57 PM »
I carry your heart with me

I am never without it

    I fear no fate

I want no world

and it's you are whatever a moon has always meant

and whatever a sun will always sing is you

here is the deepest secret nobody knows

and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart

I carry your heart with me
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2006, 02:12:35 PM »
Benaam ji very touching!!!!
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BeNam
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«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2006, 03:14:35 PM »
Thanks Burning Desire (Jeet ji!)

This was to my first love (my first girl friend), my first ever poem in English! This was written when we were in love for almost a year!

This is one of the most precious things that I had treasured for long! Now its for everyone in love!

---BENAM ----
Few love stories have perfect end, rest are endless!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #4 on: January 29, 2006, 03:21:08 PM »
thats very nice,
i also got something for someone, its almost two yrs i had written that piece, but its in punjabi, someday i may share with u and yoindia,,
take care!!
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BeNam
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«Reply #5 on: January 29, 2006, 03:46:43 PM »
When she opened her eyes I saw myself,
The moment I can't forget, I belived in myself!

Its rare to get someone so close,
just like a fall to see garden of rose!


--- BENAM ---
Very few love stories have perfect end,
Rest are end less!!!!
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Rajbir
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«Reply #6 on: January 29, 2006, 04:44:59 PM »
Benam and Jeet

Deadly piece of work by both of you !

Rajbir
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: January 29, 2006, 07:25:38 PM »
wowow bahoot khoob Benam and Jeet!!!!

Very touching and emotional!!!!
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BeNam
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«Reply #8 on: January 29, 2006, 11:23:43 PM »
Thanks Pooja and Rajbir for appreciating!
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anjani_si
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«Reply #9 on: January 29, 2006, 11:32:11 PM »
never saw such a work!!!!gud both of u benam and burning desires!!!!!!!!!
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BeNam
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«Reply #10 on: January 30, 2006, 12:53:36 AM »
Thanks Anajani_si!

A heart was broken, when she turned away,
A heart still bleeds, why she walked away,
A desire still burns, when she ''ill hear what I say,
A heart is sinking, when she 'ill come my way!

A heart is dead, she will never return,
A desire turned ash, she will never return!

--- BENAM ---
Heart knows no language, it only communicates through love!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #11 on: January 30, 2006, 04:09:33 AM »
Heart, we will forget her,
You and I, tonight!
You must forget the warmth she gave,
I will forget the light.

When you have done pray tell me,
Then I, my thoughts, will dim.
ahh!!(sigh) while you're lagging
I may remember her!
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BeNam
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«Reply #12 on: January 31, 2006, 12:58:34 AM »
I can forgive you,
But how can I forget you,
So what if you broke my heart,
I still cant stop loving you!

Whatever may be the reason,
How bad may be the season,
You always kept your promise,
Thats why you are in my hearts prison!

I wont say please come back,
I know you wont listen to me,
I wont say let me come close,
I know you wont let me!

I know you are gone far away,
But the moments we share are there in my heart to stay!

-- BENAM--
A heart that still bleeds but never complaints,
Because it knows it wont stop the pain!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #13 on: January 31, 2006, 02:48:37 AM »
Benam ji,, marvelous!!!!
thnks anjani ji n Rajbir bro!!!

Escape me?
Never-oh my Beloved!
While I am I, and you are you,
So long as the world contains us both,
Me the loving and you the loth,

My life is a fault at last, I fear-
It seems too much like a fate, indeed!
Though I do my best I shall  succeed here
But what if I fail of my purpose here?
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: January 31, 2006, 03:28:30 AM »
Maine kabhi English mai nahi likha, na hi shayd likh saku....magar app dono ne bahoot acha likha hai.... Good job BeNam and Jeet!!!
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