They can not sing a freedom's song,-1997- Saurabh Saraswat

by Ram Saraswat on December 15, 2013, 03:03:30 AM
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Friends,This poem is from the school days of my younger son Saurabh.

For those, who are fed, in a golden pot,
      but inside the cage, and no more any dream.
they can not fly,  but  wings  they got,
      for all  their  desires,  are not  supreme.

their will is weak , now no more  strong,
     they can not think of those, who  are free.
and  can not  sing,  a  freedom's   song,
     they can   not swing, on branch of  a tree.

They still remember, their good old days,
     when  wind  was  blowing,  only  for  them.
and   each   spring,   in  so  many ways,
     came to their lives, like  a precious gem.  

With   great effort, they built that nest,
     by   picking   straws,  with a  tiny beak.
nestling  day  and  night,  with out rest,
     like    an    expert,    on   his    peak.    

For  going  out,  in  search  of  grain,  
     or any thing, to feed that cute little one.
waiting  for them, in heat cold or rain,
     for parental love, warm feeling and  fun.




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«Reply #1 on: December 15, 2013, 03:35:20 AM »
Friends,This poem is from the school days of my younger son Saurabh.

For those, who are fed, in a golden pot,
      but inside the cage, and no more any dream.
they can not fly,  but  wings  they got,
      for all  their  desires,  are not  supreme.

their will is weak , now no more  strong,
     they can not think of those, who  are free.
and  can not  sing,  a  freedom's   song,
     they can   not swing, on branch of  a tree.

They still remember, their good old days,
     when  wind  was  blowing,  only  for  them.
and   each   spring,   in  so  many ways,
     came to their lives, like  a precious gem.  

With   great effort, they built that nest,
     by   picking   straws,  with a  tiny beak.
nestling  day  and  night,  with out rest,
     like    an    expert,    on   his    peak.    

For  going  out,  in  search  of  grain,  
     or any thing, to feed that cute little one.
waiting  for them, in heat cold or rain,
     for parental love, warm feeling and  fun.







wow superbly expressed by saurabh icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #2 on: December 15, 2013, 08:21:42 AM »
That's amazing !! Superb rhyming.
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«Reply #3 on: December 15, 2013, 09:33:18 AM »
beautiful
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«Reply #4 on: December 15, 2013, 11:52:53 AM »
v. Nice
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«Reply #5 on: December 15, 2013, 01:20:44 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Beautiful.
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«Reply #6 on: December 15, 2013, 06:00:48 PM »
umda
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«Reply #7 on: December 17, 2013, 01:34:13 AM »

wow superbly expressed by saurabh icon_flower icon_flower!

Many thanks Shebaji
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«Reply #8 on: December 17, 2013, 05:24:17 AM »
That's amazing !! Superb rhyming.
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«Reply #9 on: December 17, 2013, 05:25:05 AM »
beautiful
many thanks Dr. Saini
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«Reply #10 on: December 17, 2013, 05:28:13 AM »
v. Nice
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«Reply #11 on: December 17, 2013, 05:29:20 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause

Beautiful.
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«Reply #12 on: December 17, 2013, 05:30:13 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: December 17, 2013, 12:28:30 PM »
superb Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: December 17, 2013, 11:55:56 PM »
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