Na dekhe jo ujale mein,Shama dikhla ke kyaa hoga..... Saurabh Saraswat

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P.S. Dosto,1995 mein jab mera bada beta apni padhai ke liye USA jaraha tha to airport per mere chhote bete (Saurabh)  se uske mamere bhai ne kaha ki " what kind of brother are you? I can't see even a single tear in your eyes" saurabh ne us waqt us se kuchh nahi kaha, lekin ghar aaker ye poem likhi thi.Haan, meine thoda edit bhi kiya tha.
   
Dikha kar aankhein nam apni,
                     bahut  izhar   karte    hein,
Na  jinki aankh mein aansu,
                     na  kya  wo pyaar karte hein?

Kisi  ko   taras  aata  hai,
                     kisi    ko    hoti    hairaani,
kisi   ko   ye lagein  moti,
                     koi    kahta    inhein   paani.

Kisi  se  kyaa  kahe  koi,
                     sabhi   ka   apnapan     apna,
hai dil apna,zabaan apni,
                     samajh   apni  aur man   apna.

ye maana aankh ke aansu,
                    zabaan  se  ziyada kahte hein,
magar mat bhuliye aansu,
                    kabhi dil mein hee rahte hein. 

Jo "Saurabh" baat hai dil mein,
                    zabaan  tak laa ke  kyaa hoga,
na dekhe jo ujale mein,
                    shama   dikhla ke  kyaa  hoga.     
   
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P.S. Dosto,1995 mein jab mera bada beta apni padhai ke liye USA jaraha tha to airport per mere chhote bete (Saurabh)  se uske mamere bhai ne kaha ki " what kind of brother are you? I can't see even a single tear in your eyes" saurabh ne us waqt us se kuchh nahi kaha, lekin ghar aaker ye poem likhi thi.Haan, meine thoda edit bhi kiya tha.
   
Dikha kar aankhein nam apni,
                     bahut  izhar   karte    hein,
Na  jinki aankh mein aansu,
                     na  kya  wo pyaar karte hein?

Kisi  ko   taras  aata  hai,
                     kisi    ko    hoti    hairaani,
kisi   ko   ye lagein  moti,
                     koi    kahta    inhein   paani.

Kisi  se  kyaa  kahe  koi,
                     sabhi   ka   apnapan     apna,
hai dil apna,zabaan apni,
                     samajh   apni  aur man   apna.

ye maana aankh ke aansu,
                    zabaan  se  ziyada kahte hein,
magar mat bhuliye aansu,
                    kabhi dil mein hee rahte hein. 

Jo "Saurabh" baat hai dil mein,
                    zabaan  tak laa ke  kyaa hoga,
na dekhe jo ujale mein,
                    shama   dikhla ke  kyaa  hoga.     
   



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«Reply #2 on: November 08, 2012, 12:24:35 AM »
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Saraswat Jee Aadaab!


Badi achchi rachna likhi hai aapke sahabzade ne... Usual Smile
Waqai dil ke dard ko khoob bayaaN kiya hai ...


humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                   

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«Reply #3 on: November 08, 2012, 12:47:26 AM »
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very nice poem
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«Reply #8 on: November 08, 2012, 12:41:24 PM »
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P.S. Dosto,1995 mein jab mera bada beta apni padhai ke liye USA jaraha tha to airport per mere chhote bete (Saurabh)  se uske mamere bhai ne kaha ki " what kind of brother are you? I can't see even a single tear in your eyes" saurabh ne us waqt us se kuchh nahi kaha, lekin ghar aaker ye poem likhi thi.Haan, meine thoda edit bhi kiya tha.
   
Dikha kar aankhein nam apni,
                     bahut  izhar   karte    hein,
Na  jinki aankh mein aansu,
                     na  kya  wo pyaar karte hein?

Kisi  ko   taras  aata  hai,
                     kisi    ko    hoti    hairaani,
kisi   ko   ye lagein  moti,
                     koi    kahta    inhein   paani.

Kisi  se  kyaa  kahe  koi,
                     sabhi   ka   apnapan     apna,
hai dil apna,zabaan apni,
                     samajh   apni  aur man   apna.

ye maana aankh ke aansu,
                    zabaan  se  ziyada kahte hein,
magar mat bhuliye aansu,
                    kabhi dil mein hee rahte hein. 

Jo "Saurabh" baat hai dil mein,
                    zabaan  tak laa ke  kyaa hoga,
na dekhe jo ujale mein,
                    shama   dikhla ke  kyaa  hoga.     
   



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Waaaah Kya Dard Bayaan Kiya Hai Aapke Bete Ne..Aur Sach Bhi Hai "Aansuu Dil mein Hi To Rehte Hai"

Dil Se Daad...
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Saraswat Jee Aadaab!


Badi achchi rachna likhi hai aapke sahabzade ne... Usual Smile
Waqai dil ke dard ko khoob bayaaN kiya hai ...


humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                   


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