Value Of Love............M@@H!!!....

by Saman Firdaus on September 27, 2013, 10:40:54 PM
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Saman Firdaus
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Na thi jisko mere pyaar ki Qadar
Ittefaaq se usi ko chah rahi thi main
Usi diye ne jalaya mere hathon ko
Jisko hawa se bacha rahi thi main…

The one who never valued my love
Coincidentally I was loving only her
That candle itself burnt my hand
The one I was protecting from wind…
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mkv
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«Reply #1 on: September 27, 2013, 10:59:00 PM »
Nicely written lines but.
You have posted under ENGLISH head.so english version should come first. Translation is unnecessary in my opinion.

The translated version in Hindi ..normally people will notice it as Hindi english combination.
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Saman Firdaus
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«Reply #2 on: September 27, 2013, 11:25:10 PM »
Quote from: mkv on September 27, 2013, 10:59:00 PM
Nicely written lines but.
You have posted under ENGLISH head.so english version should come first. Translation is unnecessary in my opinion.

The translated version in Hindi ..normally people will notice it as Hindi english combination.


I m so sorry.. I will take care of it next time..
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Advo.RavinderaRavi
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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2013, 11:29:32 PM »
Bahut Khoob.
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ambalika sharma
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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2013, 11:30:41 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Saman Firdaus
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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2013, 11:31:11 PM »
Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on September 27, 2013, 11:29:32 PM
Bahut Khoob.
Thnku..
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Saman Firdaus
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«Reply #6 on: September 27, 2013, 11:32:24 PM »
Quote from: ambalika sharma on September 27, 2013, 11:30:41 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thnku Ambalika ji..
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F.H.SIDDIQUI
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«Reply #7 on: September 27, 2013, 11:56:21 PM »
nice one . But I agree with Mr. MKV's suggestion .
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Saman Firdaus
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«Reply #8 on: September 28, 2013, 12:00:23 AM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 27, 2013, 11:56:21 PM
nice one . But I agree with Mr. MKV's suggestion .
Uff mere allah i m really very sorry for my mistake.. I m new here and i am not aware of all this. I will take care of it next time. Definately... Sorry Again..
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«Reply #9 on: September 28, 2013, 12:49:30 AM »
Kya baat hai dil bada masoom hai tumhara khuda ka naam laker sorry mangte ho.achhchhi poem likhni aati hai jabhi to Thumbs UP
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Advo.RavinderaRavi
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«Reply #10 on: September 28, 2013, 01:06:06 AM »
Welcome.
Quote from: Saman Firdaus on September 27, 2013, 11:31:11 PM
Thnku..
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Saman Firdaus
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«Reply #11 on: September 28, 2013, 01:26:40 AM »
Quote from: Dineshkumarjonty on September 28, 2013, 12:49:30 AM
Kya baat hai dil bada masoom hai tumhara khuda ka naam laker sorry mangte ho.achhchhi poem likhni aati hai jabhi to Thumbs UP
Bahot bahot shukriya aapka..
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«Reply #12 on: September 28, 2013, 08:42:39 AM »
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Saman Firdaus
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«Reply #13 on: September 28, 2013, 11:46:32 AM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on September 28, 2013, 08:42:39 AM
good
Thnku Saini ji..
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«Reply #14 on: September 28, 2013, 11:59:58 AM »
It's ok
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