When u r in love..

by Heena khan on January 06, 2009, 08:17:05 PM
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I’ll tell you when

When you are in love my friend

When your love is not to defend

When you take life as it comes

When with you river runs

When you live breath by breath

When you fear no death

When you sing with the birds

And flock about with herds

When you dance in the rain

When you smile in the pain

When you say when no more

When within you are for sure

When you let the love be

When you let not love be greed

When you let love be fleeting experience

When you let be your fragrance

Smile and question no more

Smile the nature is to adore..
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«Reply #1 on: January 06, 2009, 08:40:06 PM »
nice !!

English me Bhi shayari Hone lagi kya bath hai !! har chiz pe issi zabaan ka qabsa hai is daur me !! kahan gayi wo zabaan aur qalam jiss ke liye urdu zabaan machal rahi hai !!

Meri Duvaun ka khuch sila de !!
Kar Karishma fir se koi"EQBAL" de!!

Qadeer Toopchi
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #2 on: January 06, 2009, 09:41:57 PM »
Very good Heena........Keep writing
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«Reply #3 on: January 06, 2009, 09:47:33 PM »
I’ll tell you when

When you are in love my friend

When your love is not to defend

When you take life as it comes

When with you river runs

When you live breath by breath

When you fear no death

When you sing with the birds

And flock about with herds

When you dance in the rain

When you smile in the pain

When you say when no more

When within you are for sure

When you let the love be

When you let not love be greed

When you let love be fleeting experience

When you let be your fragrance

Smile and question no more

Smile the nature is to adore..

But Exellent Heena Ji !! Aur Galath Na samjhna Maine Jolikhe hai wo apki ghazal per nahi balki aj ke mahool per hai !! hope u understand the point !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #4 on: January 06, 2009, 10:02:08 PM »
Thx frnz
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«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2009, 10:03:28 PM »
beautiful
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