दम निकले....अमित प्रकाश "मीत"

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सोच कर कहीं नहीं जाता
जहाँ बड़े कदम चल निकले

यूँ ही फिरता हूँ दर बदर
कहीं से तो दिलबर निकले

दिक्कत्तें बहुत हैं ज़िन्दगी मैं
ख़ुशी का कोई मंज़र निकले

बीत गया रमजान का महीना
अब तो ईद का चाँद निकले 

फ़ना तो होना ही है “मीत”
तेरे पहलू में ही दम निकले







Soch Kar Kahin Nahi Jaata
Jahan Bade Kadam Chal Nikle

Yun Hi Firta Hun Dar Badar
Kahin Se To Dilbar Nikle

Dikkattein Bahut Hain Zindagi Main
Khushi Ka Koi Manzar Nikle

Beet Gaya Ramzaan Ka Mahina
Ab To Eid Ka Chaand Nikle

Fana To Hona Hi Hai “Meet”
Tere Pehlu Mein Hi Dam Nikle
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«Reply #1 on: November 09, 2013, 08:23:45 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: November 09, 2013, 09:36:57 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: November 09, 2013, 09:45:05 PM »
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सोच कर कहीं नहीं जाता
जहाँ बड़े कदम चल निकले

यूँ ही फिरता हूँ दर बदर
कहीं से तो दिलबर निकले

दिक्कत्तें बहुत हैं ज़िन्दगी मैं
ख़ुशी का कोई मंज़र निकले

बीत गया रमजान का महीना
अब तो ईद का चाँद निकले 

फ़ना तो होना ही है “मीत”
तेरे पहलू में ही दम निकले







Soch Kar Kahin Nahi Jaata
Jahan Bade Kadam Chal Nikle

Yun Hi Firta Hun Dar Badar
Kahin Se To Dilbar Nikle

Dikkattein Bahut Hain Zindagi Main
Khushi Ka Koi Manzar Nikle

Beet Gaya Ramzaan Ka Mahina
Ab To Eid Ka Chaand Nikle

Fana To Hona Hi Hai “Meet”
Tere Pehlu Mein Hi Dam Nikle



excellent,sir
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«Reply #4 on: November 09, 2013, 10:01:19 PM »
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Soch Kar Kahin Nahi Jaata
Jahan Bade Kadam Chal Nikle

Yun Hi Firta Hun Dar Badar
Kahin Se To Dilbar Nikl

bahut khoob. deron daad  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: November 10, 2013, 01:11:49 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया सैनी जी......
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«Reply #6 on: November 10, 2013, 01:29:01 AM »
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Waaaaaah behad khooooooooob amit ji.. dheron dheron daaaaaaaaad..
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«Reply #7 on: November 10, 2013, 01:29:44 AM »
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फ़ना तो होना ही है “मीत”
तेरे पहलू में ही दम निकले

waah bahut umda amit jee..happy9
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«Reply #8 on: November 10, 2013, 02:17:07 AM »
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सोच कर कहीं नहीं जाता
जहाँ बड़े कदम चल निकले

यूँ ही फिरता हूँ दर बदर
कहीं से तो दिलबर निकले

दिक्कत्तें बहुत हैं ज़िन्दगी मैं
ख़ुशी का कोई मंज़र निकले

बीत गया रमजान का महीना
अब तो ईद का चाँद निकले 

फ़ना तो होना ही है “मीत”
तेरे पहलू में ही दम निकले


waaah sunder abhivyakti.....haardik badhaee.....Raqeeb






Soch Kar Kahin Nahi Jaata
Jahan Bade Kadam Chal Nikle

Yun Hi Firta Hun Dar Badar
Kahin Se To Dilbar Nikle

Dikkattein Bahut Hain Zindagi Main
Khushi Ka Koi Manzar Nikle

Beet Gaya Ramzaan Ka Mahina
Ab To Eid Ka Chaand Nikle

Fana To Hona Hi Hai “Meet”
Tere Pehlu Mein Hi Dam Nikle

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«Reply #9 on: November 10, 2013, 10:48:36 AM »
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सोच कर कहीं नहीं जाता
जहाँ बड़े कदम चल निकले

यूँ ही फिरता हूँ दर बदर
कहीं से तो दिलबर निकले

दिक्कत्तें बहुत हैं ज़िन्दगी मैं
ख़ुशी का कोई मंज़र निकले

बीत गया रमजान का महीना
अब तो ईद का चाँद निकले 

फ़ना तो होना ही है “मीत”
तेरे पहलू में ही दम निकले







Soch Kar Kahin Nahi Jaata
Jahan Bade Kadam Chal Nikle
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Yun Hi Firta Hun Dar Badar
Kahin Se To Dilbar Nikle
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Dikkattein Bahut Hain Zindagi Main
Khushi Ka Koi Manzar Nikle
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:main nikkal gai Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!
Beet Gaya Ramzaan Ka Mahina
Ab To Eid Ka Chaand Nikle
bhai, eid ka chand mahine ke aakhir mein nikalta hi hai tabhi eid manaai jaati hai tum kis chand ki baat kar rahe ho icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch!
Fana To Hona Hi Hai “Meet”
Tere Pehlu Mein Hi Dam Nikle

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



good icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #10 on: November 10, 2013, 10:08:37 PM »
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bahot khooob, bas waaaah waaaaah...
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«Reply #11 on: November 11, 2013, 08:02:24 PM »
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bahut khoob amit ji.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #12 on: November 12, 2013, 02:35:32 AM »
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very nice
बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया किट्टू जी....
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«Reply #13 on: November 12, 2013, 07:42:05 AM »
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excellent,sir
बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया मरहूम जी.....
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«Reply #14 on: November 13, 2013, 07:17:57 AM »
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bahut khoob. deron daad  Thumbs UP
बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया सुमन जी......
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