Abke Mousam hi nahi Rishte Nibhane waale.........

by vipul kumar on April 19, 2011, 08:48:23 AM
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Ab Wahi.n Lout ja Dasht-e-junu.n se aane waale......
Abke Mousam Hi nahi Rishte Nibhaane Waale.....

Ab Kahan Log Wo Seene se Lagaane Waale.....
Ab To Hai Dost Bhi Suuli pe chadhaane waale......

Khat Ke Purze Bhi Tere Le Gayi Naadan Hawaa,
Chhin Kar le Gaye Yaade.n Bhi Zamaane Waale.....

Mere sapne bhi teri niinde.n haraam kar jaaye,
Meri Aankho.n se mere Khwaab Churaane Waale.......

Aaj baazar me utar aaye fir ahmaaq-e-junu.n,
Kahan hai uriya.n_Jabi.n pe sang uthaane waale.....
[Ahmaaq=Mad; Uriya.n_Jabi.n=Naked Forehead]

Dila! Shahar-e-Fareb hai ise mahfooj na samajh,
Chhup ke baithe hai sabhi Teer Chalaane waale....

Meri dhadkan ki Raftaar le gaye mujhse,
Mere Haatho.n se tera naam mitaane waale.....

Taab itna hai to Maazi ke marasim ko mitaa,,
Khat ke purzo.n ko ganga me bahaane waale......
[Maazi=Past; Marasim=Relations]

Fasaane jafaa ke apne bhi bayaa.n karta,
Mere Rone k qisse Duniya ko bataane waale......

Zaraa anban hai Farishto.n se aajkal YaaRa,
Ham nahi haath dua me ab uthaane waale......!!
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«Reply #1 on: April 19, 2011, 08:53:06 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah Waah!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Vipul ji

Lajawaab Peshaksh!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: April 19, 2011, 09:03:50 AM »
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kya baat…
kya ghazal…
hats off vipul ji…
aap cd banao apni ghazlo ka…
hum sunne ko aatoor hain
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«Reply #3 on: April 19, 2011, 09:09:57 AM »
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vipul ji…
mujhe pata hai aap waawahi batorne ko nai likhte ghazalen…
aapki ghazal to bas tohfa hai hamare lie…
aap jesa ghazal meri nazar me aur koi nai likhta…
lajawaab writer ho aap…
kabi kabi tohfa dete rahiyega…
sukriya
khus rahiye
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«Reply #4 on: April 19, 2011, 01:18:56 PM »
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Bahut Khub Vipul Bhai
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«Reply #5 on: April 19, 2011, 11:39:47 PM »
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bahut khub vipulji... kamaal ki ghazal... bahut khub..

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: April 20, 2011, 05:34:24 AM »
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Aap sabhi dosto ka tah-e-Dil se shukriya Mujhe padhne ke liye.....
Mujhe bahut Khushi hoti hai agar kisi ko meri ghazal sukuun deti hai....

Chahe wo ghazal ho, Nazm ho, Na'at ho, Romantic ho, Realstic ho, Kisi bhi language me ho{i write in Hindi, English, Urdu, Punjabi, Farsi}.. Bas Mera likhne ka ek hi maqsad hota hai, Ki jab koi padhe to use Bas sukuun ka ehsas ho...
Mujhe Formality ki Taarif nahi chahiye. Mujhe bas wahi 'waah' chahiye jo Kalam padhke khud_ba_khud muh se nikal jaaye.....
Aur main aap sab ka shukrguzaar hu is sukhan ke safar me aapke saath ke liye.....
Khush rahe.n..........
Duao.n ke saath..........Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2011, 08:40:46 AM »
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@ Kill_Bill ji.
Pahle to shukriya ki aapne mujhe itna waqt diya.
Hmm. Rahi baat cd ki to insha allah,Jald hi main kuchh bada kadam badhaunga sukhan ki duniya me....


Aur aap sahi samjhe, Main comments ke liye nahi likhta.
Ghazal mera junun hai meri jaan hai. Main kayi baar class me pakda gaya hu ghazal likhte hue, Kayi baar raat ko 3-4 baje uthkar copy dhundne lag jata hu(Is se kaafi log aapko paagal bhi samajh sakte hai:p).. par ghazal ka shouk meri rag rag me hai.
Main ghazal isliye likhta hu kyonki mujhe apni saans chalani hai...
Post to bas isiliye kar deta hu kyonki Jab main tooti footi ghazale.n likhta tha, aur jab mujhe commemnts ki jarurat hoti thi to inhi websites ke members ne mujhe vishwas dilaya ki main kuchh likh sakta hu. Inke bina main kuchh nahi hota.
Isiliye ab main ise nahi chhod sakta....
Aur baad me 'Nirala ji' jaise kuchh dosto ne kaha ki kam se kam ek do baar waqt nikalkar yaha post kar diya kijiye, So unka pyar ab ye chhodne bhi nahi deta...
Though your comments are useful for judging my ghazals....
Main ek baar fir shukriya ada karta hu aap sabhi dosto ka.....
And thanks for making me your Fav. Poet..... icon_salut
Bahut bahut shukriya........
 
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2011, 08:50:10 AM »
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hmmm…
vipul ji mene apki ghazalen parh je smjh lia tha…
ye apka junun hai……
aur dua karta hu ke aap aap aage jayen…
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«Reply #9 on: April 20, 2011, 08:53:52 AM »
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hmmm…
vipul ji mene apki ghazalen parh je smjh lia tha…
ye apka junun hai……
aur dua karta hu ke aap aap aage jayen…


Bas ye duaye.n hi mujhe yaha tak laayi hai dost.....
Shukriya..........
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