Alwidaa ho chukey gamkhwaar ko kaisey bhooluun?

by abdbundeli on March 10, 2010, 07:16:14 PM
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Dilrubaa, nam huye rukhsaar ko kaisey bhooluun?
Beyzubaan hi huye izhaar ko kaisey bhooluun?

Naazneenoun ki shoukhiyon pai log martey hain:
Alwidaa ho chukey gamkhwaar ko kaisey bhooluun?

Hamnawaayee thee, shaakh-o-gul see aashnaayee thee;
Us azeezee key sarokaar ko kaisey bhooluun?

Tum nahin zad mein: kaho, ab uyoon kyaa deykheyn?
Zeest key dour mein, ab yaar ko kaisey bhooluun?

Zarrey-zarrey mein nihaan muttahid hai paikar sey;
Baatinee noor key us pyaar ko kaisey bhooluun?

Mein namaazee to nahin huun, ki, khudaa sey maangoon;
Yaar, is–paar sey us paar ko kaisey bhooluun!

Ab, 'abd', unko pukaaruun bhi, woh na aayengey;
Aakhiree unkee us pukaar ko kaisey bhooluun?

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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2010, 07:32:02 PM »
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Waah Waah bahoot bahoot Abd ji.. Unkahe ehsaaso bakoobi lafzo mea uttar GhaZal ka Roop diya hai Bahoot Bahoot Umda !
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«Reply #2 on: March 10, 2010, 07:41:01 PM »
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Waah Waah bahoot bahoot Abd ji.. Unkahe ehsaaso bakoobi lafzo mea uttar GhaZal ka Roop diya hai Bahoot Bahoot Umda !

Thanks, Sophi ji!

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«Reply #3 on: March 10, 2010, 08:05:29 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB ABD JI. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 11, 2010, 05:30:26 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB ABD JI. Applause Applause Applause

Shukriyah, SURESH SANGWAN ji!

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