Andhero mein ujaale ka deepak utar gaya

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Andhero mein ujaale ka deepak utar gaya
Din bhi aaj duniya mein aane se darr gaya

Lutne lagi jub betiyaan gharo ke aas paas
Bhagwaan bhi yeh halaat dekhkar  sihar gaya

Mandir mein pathron pe lad_doo chadhe bahut
Bahar koi faqeer  magar bhuke se mar gaya

Rone lagi insaaniyat phir khud ko paake aaj
Tokre mein anaath ke koi anaaj bhar gaya

Vridho ka ashram ek din mein jub bhara
Kal hoga kya se sochkar makaan darr gaya

Biwi saheed ki jub lagi bheek maangne
Sar Maa bharti ka zammeen gad gaya

Jub betiyon ne pitao_n ke juutey pehen liye
Logo ke sir se bêto_n  ka bukhaar utar gaya

Duniya mein kuch bura nahi “deepak” meri  tarah
Khudko sudhaarta  hi gaya, main jis dagar gaya
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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2014, 05:57:25 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2014, 07:20:18 PM »
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ek rau ke saath dheron daad deepak ji
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«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2014, 10:52:23 PM »
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Mandir mein pathron pe lad_doo chadhe bahut
Bahar koi faqeer  magar bhuke se mar gaya

Bahut badhiya deepak jee
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«Reply #4 on: January 06, 2014, 02:05:52 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2014, 04:26:50 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob..... Applause Applause

thank you
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«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2014, 05:43:08 PM »
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वाह...वाह...बहुत ही उम्दा...ढेरों दाद और दिली मुबारकबाद......
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«Reply #7 on: January 07, 2014, 05:48:48 PM »
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ek rau ke saath dheron daad deepak ji

SIR BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYAA AAPKO YEH GHAZAL PASAND AAYEE
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Mandir mein pathron pe lad_doo chadhe bahut
Bahar koi faqeer  magar bhuke se mar gaya

Bahut badhiya deepak jee

SHUKRIYAA SIR, ENCOURAGE KARNE KE LIYE, THANK YOU
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«Reply #9 on: January 09, 2014, 03:19:37 AM »
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Mandir mein pathron pe lad_doo chadhe bahut
Bahar koi faqeer  magar bhuke se mar gaya

Bahut badhiya deepak jee

thank you sir ji
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«Reply #10 on: January 09, 2014, 03:21:45 AM »
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bahut khoob

bahut shukriyaa
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«Reply #11 on: January 09, 2014, 03:52:32 AM »
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Andhero mein ujaale ka deepak utar gaya
Din bhi aaj duniya mein aane se darr gaya

Lutne lagi jub betiyaan gharo ke aas paas
Bhagwaan bhi yeh halaat dekhkar  sihar gaya

Mandir mein pathron pe lad_doo chadhe bahut
Bahar koi faqeer  magar bhuke se mar gaya

Rone lagi insaaniyat phir khud ko paake aaj
Tokre mein anaath ke koi anaaj bhar gaya

Vridho ka ashram ek din mein jub bhara
Kal hoga kya se sochkar makaan darr gaya

Biwi saheed ki jub lagi bheek maangne
Sar Maa bharti ka zammeen gad gaya

Jub betiyon ne pitao_n ke juutey pehen liye
Logo ke sir se bêto_n  ka bukhaar utar gaya

Duniya mein kuch bura nahi “deepak” meri  tarah
Khudko sudhaarta  hi gaya, main jis dagar gaya


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