Rooh tak main Utar gaya..

by Pooja on July 08, 2009, 07:28:08 PM
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Poori imaandari se koshish ki, Dard ke section mai kuch na likhu... magar un sab dosto se mafi chahugi.. jo bilkul nahi chahte ki main kabhi is section ko parru bhi: Kuch lines man mai aai hai wo issi section mai likhne layak hai


Dekh kar mera ghar, Gum aor sare ghar bhool gaya
Mila is kadar baar baar, Rooh tak main Utar gaya!!

hai unko pyaar mujhse, ya mai he alag ho paati nahi
yakin hai magar, Gumo se jeevan kuch sawar gaya

Mila hai gum to mili hai kuch jeene ki akal bhi
warna to ye umar ka safar, andhkaar main nikal gaya

Dekh kar mera ghar, Gum aor sare ghar bhool gaya
Mila is kadar baar baar, Rooh tak main Utar gaya!!

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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2009, 07:35:40 PM »
Lajawaab Pooja di.. Bahoot Dilse nikali hai yea lines aisa lagta hai.. Very Well expressed Pooja di.. bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2009, 07:52:30 PM »
Arre aap likhte rehna didi... bahut accha likha hai dard section mein b aap... Wah  Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2009, 10:32:08 PM »
Wah wah Pooja Ji
Laajawaab likha hai
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2009, 02:21:15 AM »
Lajawaab Pooja di.. Bahoot Dilse nikali hai yea lines aisa lagta hai.. Very Well expressed Pooja di.. bahoot Khoob!

Thanks Dear!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2009, 04:31:25 AM »
Really touching Pooja ji,excellent very nice and beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2009, 04:36:51 AM »
Arre aap likhte rehna didi... bahut accha likha hai dard section mein b aap... Wah  Applause Applause

Thanks Roja!!
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«Reply #7 on: July 09, 2009, 04:37:22 AM »
Wah wah Pooja Ji
Laajawaab likha hai
SARVESH RASTOGI

bahoot bahoot shukaria Sarvesh ji!!
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«Reply #8 on: July 09, 2009, 04:37:47 AM »
Really touching Pooja ji,excellent very nice and beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thank you so much Madhu ji!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2009, 05:23:57 AM »
"Dekh kar mera ghar, Gum aor sare ghar bhool gaya" kya baat hai.. bohot achhe pooja ji..

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«Reply #10 on: July 09, 2009, 05:26:54 AM »
Very nice Pooja Ji, Bahut achha likha! Applause
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«Reply #11 on: July 09, 2009, 05:28:54 AM »
"Dekh kar mera ghar, Gum aor sare ghar bhool gaya" kya baat hai.. bohot achhe pooja ji..



bahoot bahoot shukaria Ji Sayyid ji.. Meri kisi likhi kavita per jab apke comments atte hai to bahoot acha lagta hai!! Thanks!!
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«Reply #12 on: July 09, 2009, 05:29:21 AM »
Very nice Pooja Ji, Bahut achha likha! Applause

bahoot bahoot shukaria Deepati ji.
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«Reply #13 on: July 09, 2009, 12:54:42 PM »
KYA BAAT HAI POOJA JI....

WOH AAEY GHAR PAR MERE,SARA JAHAN BHOOL GAYA,
APNE SARE GUM BHOOLAKAR,IS TARAH MILA,
                   KI MERE ROOH MAIN UTAR GAYA.
HAI PYAAR UNKO MUJSE ,AB TO YAKIN HAI,
ISILIYE ANDHERE DIL MAIN MERE,
                 FIRSE UJAALA HUA.
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«Reply #14 on: July 09, 2009, 07:48:55 PM »
Itna Darddddddd...? Crying Waqai Har Lafz Me Dard hi Dard Nazar aa raha hai.. Aisa laga Padh kar Ki Koi Apna Hi Gam, Koi apna Hi dard aaapne Yahan Likh diya Pooja Ji.. Bahut bahut Khooooooooob.. Applause Applause

Daad Kuboool Karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Kitno Ki Palkon Me aakhir,
Laayegi Tu Aansoo "Pooja"...

Dekh Ro Rahi Hai Gazal Bhi,
Apne Likhe Hue Alfaazon Par....!!!



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