Ashqon se Hausle saja lo tum

by @kaash on January 10, 2011, 10:19:16 AM
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is ghazal ko is behr me 212/222/1212 me rakha hai maine


dard badh raha hai bacha lo tum
pehlu me apne kahin chhupa lo tum


udaas subahen khud hi khilengi
apne chehre se gham hata lo tum


sach ki kabhi raat nahi hoti
ye soch khud ko jaga lo tum

bahut door hun aur haq bhi nahi
mere lie khud ko mana lo tum


dunia 'kaash' humne kuch aise jee
ashkon se hausle saja lo tum






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«Reply #1 on: January 10, 2011, 10:30:41 AM »
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wah wah Akash ji bahut khubsurat gahazak.
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«Reply #2 on: January 10, 2011, 10:39:18 AM »
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Akash ji aapki har ashar achhe hain...
bahut khubsurat likhte hain aap.
aapko koi ray dena matlab suraj ko dia dikhana hoga.
khus rahiye
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«Reply #3 on: January 10, 2011, 08:30:51 PM »
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is ghazal ko is behr me 212/222/1212 me rakha hai maine


dard badh raha hai bacha lo tum
pehlu me apne kahin chhupa lo tum


udaas subahen khud hi khilengi
apne chehre se gham hata lo tum


sach ki kabhi raat nahi hoti
ye soch khud ko jaga lo tum

bahut door hun aur haq bhi nahi
mere lie khud ko mana lo tum


dunia 'kaash' humne kuch aise jee
ashkon se hausle saja lo tum







kaash ji bahut achcha hai waise bahr ki samajh mujhe nahin hai
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«Reply #4 on: January 11, 2011, 01:03:11 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Kaashji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ghazal
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«Reply #5 on: January 16, 2011, 06:17:13 PM »
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is ghazal ko is behr me 212/222/1212 me rakha hai maine


dard badh raha hai bacha lo tum
pehlu me apne kahin chhupa lo tum


udaas subahen khud hi khilengi
apne chehre se gham hata lo tum


sach ki kabhi raat nahi hoti
ye soch khud ko jaga lo tum

bahut door hun aur haq bhi nahi
mere lie khud ko mana lo tum


dunia 'kaash' humne kuch aise jee
ashkon se hausle saja lo tum









achi lagi aap ki tehreer janab kaash sahab
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