chhoda haath hausle ne..............saru..............

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छोड़ा  हाथ  हौसले   ने  न  डरूँ  तो  क्या  करूं
खुद पर नहीं जब इख्तियार  करूं तो क्या  करूं

मिला नहीं  अभी हवा को  रही  ज़ुस्तज़ू जिसकी
इठला के  पूछती  है  ना  फिरूँ   तो  क्या  करूं

डूबा  है  सारा  शहर  जब  समंदर-ए-सोज़  में
सोचूँ हूँ  तन्हा  तन्हा  मैं तरूँ  तो  क्या  करूं

इस  क़दर  कशिश  है इसके  ग़मों में ए ख़ुदाया
मौज-ए-दुनियाँ में बता  ना घिरूँ तो  क्या  करूं
 
सोच में  बैठा  है  आज  जुनूं -ए- अश्क़  मेरा
अटके  पलक पर  कैसे ना गिरूँ  तो  क्या करूं

जब  तलक  कच्चा  रहा  सहारे   पेड़  के  रहे
पाक  गया   पेड़ से  ना  गिरूँ  तो  क्या  करूं

लाख  हसरतें  उठी  दिल में कोशिशें  हज़ार  कीं
हाथों की लकीरों  में  नहीं  'सरु'  तो क्या करूं



Chhodaa haath  hausle ne na darooN to kya karooN
Khud par nahiN jab ikhtiyaar karooN to kya karooN

Mila nahiN abhi     hawaa  ko  rahi  justju jiski
Ithala ke  poochti hai naa firooN to  kya  karooN

Dooba hai  sara shahar  jab  samandar-e-soz  meiN
SochuN hooN tanha tanha meiN tarooN to kya karooN

Iss kadar kashish hai iske ghamoN mein e khudaya
Mauz-e-duniaN meiN bata na ghirooN to kya karooN

Soch meiN  baitha hai  aaj  junooN-e-shaq  mera
AtkooN palak par kaise na girooN to kya karooN

Jab talak  kachha rahaa  sahaare peid ke  rahe
Pa  gaya  peid  se  na girooN  to  kya  karooN

Lakh hasratein uthi dil mein koshisheN hazaar ki
haathoN ki lakeeroN mein nahiN ‘saru’to kya karooN





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«Reply #1 on: March 04, 2014, 12:00:10 AM »
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beautiful dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: March 04, 2014, 12:06:38 AM »
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wah wah dhero daad
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«Reply #3 on: March 04, 2014, 12:46:22 AM »
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छोड़ा  हाथ  हौसले   ने  न  डरूँ  तो  क्या  करूं
खुद पर नहीं जब इख्तियार  करूं तो क्या  करूं

मिला नहीं  अभी हवा को  रही  ज़ुस्तज़ू जिसकी
इठला के  पूछती  है  ना  फिरूँ   तो  क्या  करूं

डूबा  है  सारा  शहर  जब  समंदर-ए-सोज़  में
सोचूँ हूँ  तन्हा  तन्हा  मैं तरूँ  तो  क्या  करूं

इस  क़दर  कशिश  है इसके  ग़मों में ए ख़ुदाया
मौज-ए-दुनियाँ में बता  ना घिरूँ तो  क्या  करूं
 
सोच में  बैठा  है  आज  जुनूं -ए- अश्क़  मेरा
अटके  पलक पर  कैसे ना गिरूँ  तो  क्या करूं

जब  तलक  कच्चा  रहा  सहारे   पेड़  के  रहे
पाक  गया   पेड़ से  ना  गिरूँ  तो  क्या  करूं

लाख  हसरतें  उठी  दिल में कोशिशें  हज़ार  कीं
हाथों की लकीरों  में  नहीं  'सरु'  तो क्या करूं


Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob Suresh Jee...

Gehrai Khoob Nazar Aayi Iss Ghazal mein...Khaas Taur par Yeh Ashaar

इस  क़दर  कशिश  है इसके  ग़मों में ए ख़ुदाया
मौज-ए-दुनियाँ में बता  ना घिरूँ तो  क्या  करूं

जब  तलक  कच्चा  रहा  सहारे   पेड़  के  रहे
पाक  गया   पेड़ से  ना  गिरूँ  तो  क्या  करूं

लाख  हसरतें  उठी  दिल में कोशिशें  हज़ार  कीं
हाथों की लकीरों  में  नहीं  'सरु'  तो क्या करूं


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«Reply #4 on: March 04, 2014, 02:13:50 AM »
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वाह....वाह....बहुत ही खूब....ढेरों दाद और तहे दिल से मुबारकबाद.....
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«Reply #5 on: March 04, 2014, 03:21:39 AM »
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bahut khoob.....
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«Reply #6 on: March 04, 2014, 03:29:05 AM »
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बहुत खूब
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«Reply #7 on: March 04, 2014, 05:08:30 AM »
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thankeww soooooooooooo much khwahish ji
Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob Suresh Jee...

Gehrai Khoob Nazar Aayi Iss Ghazal mein...Khaas Taur par Yeh Ashaar

इस  क़दर  कशिश  है इसके  ग़मों में ए ख़ुदाया
मौज-ए-दुनियाँ में बता  ना घिरूँ तो  क्या  करूं

जब  तलक  कच्चा  रहा  सहारे   पेड़  के  रहे
पाक  गया   पेड़ से  ना  गिरूँ  तो  क्या  करूं

लाख  हसरतें  उठी  दिल में कोशिशें  हज़ार  कीं
हाथों की लकीरों  में  नहीं  'सरु'  तो क्या करूं


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bahut 2 shukriya saini ji
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beautiful dheron daad
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«Reply #9 on: March 04, 2014, 05:33:36 AM »
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thanks a lot amit ji
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वाह....वाह....बहुत ही खूब....ढेरों दाद और तहे दिल से मुबारकबाद.....
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bahut khoob.....
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thanks a lot nandbahu ji
wah wah dhero daad
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beautiful dheron daad
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«Reply #13 on: March 04, 2014, 09:32:07 AM »
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Suresh Jee Aadaab... !

Waah Waah Waah jee Waah kia kahne behad khoob aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai jee...

Aap jis tarhaa se tarha se naye naye radiff O kafiyoN ko baqubi anjaam deti hai dekhkar yaqeen nahi hota ke in radiff O kafiyoN par aik mukammal kalaam ho sakti hai... realy just mindblowing and hats of you...

Likhte rahiye.. bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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waah waah bahot khub
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