Chhoda hai...

by brokenbyluv on March 24, 2010, 07:11:24 PM
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Jab se tune merra hath chhoda hai,
tab se kalam ne bhi merra sath chhoda hai,

nhi bante koi alfaz merre jazbato k,
terri doori ne merra har ehsas toda hai,

tu tou wahan apno mein khush hai,
merri tanhai ne bhi aaj mujhse rukh moda hai,

mhbt se darte the per tune hausla dilaya,
aur aaj tune hi mhbt ko phir BEWAFA LAFZ se joda hai..

tu darr mat merre ajnabi main sambhal jaungi,
jis chaht k tufan mein aaj tune bhi mujhe laa chhoda hai......
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«Reply #1 on: March 24, 2010, 07:23:17 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya shihab ji..
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«Reply #2 on: March 24, 2010, 10:31:12 PM »
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Bhut khoob likha hai
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«Reply #3 on: March 25, 2010, 12:15:02 PM »
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awesome geet di....
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«Reply #4 on: March 25, 2010, 12:36:51 PM »
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Wah wah wah.... Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Applause


Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 24, 2010, 07:11:24 PM
Jab se tune merra hath chhoda hai,
tab se kalam ne bhi merra sath chhoda hai,

nhi bante koi alfaz merre jazbato k,
terri doori ne merra har ehsas toda hai,

tu tou wahan apno mein khush hai,
merri tanhai ne bhi aaj mujhse rukh moda hai,

mhbt se darte the per tune hausla dilaya,
aur aaj tune hi mhbt ko phir BEWAFA LAFZ se joda hai..

tu darr mat merre ajnabi main sambhal jaungi,
jis chaht k tufan mein aaj tune bhi mujhe laa chhoda hai......
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«Reply #5 on: March 25, 2010, 02:48:37 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Geetji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: March 25, 2010, 04:23:07 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurti se aapne bewafa mohabbat k naam ye panktiyaan likhi hai. Bahut sundar likha hai. Ek ek shabd aapke dil ka dard bayaan kar raha hai. Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji... bahut khoob likha hai...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut dard hota hai jab koi apna hi ghayal karta hai... !!!

Kuch panktiyaan meri taraf se usi bewafa mohabbat k naam...

Maloom tha tujhe saanse hamari ruk jaati hain tere bagair,
Phir kyun wafa ka chhal karke tune ek pal me hume bana diya gair,
Shikwa ya shikayat kya kare hum bewafai ki auro se,
Kismat to hamari aisi hai ki hume apno ne hi bana diya gair.....
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«Reply #7 on: March 25, 2010, 05:35:26 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya neel ji,think ji,koyal n khwaish ji...
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«Reply #8 on: March 25, 2010, 05:50:00 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on March 25, 2010, 04:23:07 PM
Bahut khoobsurti se aapne bewafa mohabbat k naam ye panktiyaan likhi hai. Bahut sundar likha hai. Ek ek shabd aapke dil ka dard bayaan kar raha hai. Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji... bahut khoob likha hai...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut dard hota hai jab koi apna hi ghayal karta hai... !!!

Kuch panktiyaan meri taraf se usi bewafa mohabbat k naam...

Maloom tha tujhe saanse hamari ruk jaati hain tere bagair,
Phir kyun wafa ka chhal karke tune ek pal me hume bana diya gair,
Shikwa ya shikayat kya kare hum bewafai ki auro se,
Kismat to hamari aisi hai ki hume apno ne hi bana diya gair.....


Kapil ji itni tarif sunke merra dil bhar aaya...merre dard ko itna sarahenge aap mujhe malum nhi tha maine tou bus yu hi dil ki baat suni aur kalam chala di..tahe dil se shukriya ek baar phir..


Vo gair nhi hai per apna bhi na ban saka,
uski chah ne mujhe jahan bhula diya,
aaj jab keh di maine apne dil ki baat use..
tou usne sab k saamne mujhe hi gunehgar bata diya......
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«Reply #9 on: March 25, 2010, 08:04:33 PM »
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Aapne kalam jarur chalaya hai Geet ji par uska rishta to dil se hi hai...

dil aur kalam me fark hi kitna hai,
ek me dard rehta hai dusre me syahi,
dil ka dard kam hone ka naam nahi leti,
aur na khatam hoti hai kalam ki syahi...


Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 25, 2010, 05:50:00 PM
Kapil ji itni tarif sunke merra dil bhar aaya...merre dard ko itna sarahenge aap mujhe malum nhi tha maine tou bus yu hi dil ki baat suni aur kalam chala di..tahe dil se shukriya ek baar phir..


Vo gair nhi hai per apna bhi na ban saka,
uski chah ne mujhe jahan bhula diya,
aaj jab keh di maine apne dil ki baat use..
tou usne sab k saamne mujhe hi gunehgar bata diya......
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«Reply #10 on: March 25, 2010, 09:29:48 PM »
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Bahut hi khoob Geet ji,Kapil ji,Shihab ji.very touching and mindblowing creation,excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #11 on: March 25, 2010, 11:07:35 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaaa Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on March 25, 2010, 09:29:48 PM
Bahut hi khoob Geet ji,Kapil ji,Shihab ji.very touching and mindblowing creation,excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #12 on: March 26, 2010, 03:07:37 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on March 25, 2010, 09:23:50 PM
Kiya Hi Kab Tha Tumne Izhaar-e-Muhabat
Jo Aaj Lagaaye Mere Sar Itne Ilzaam Hai.

Kya Itna Hi Yakin Tha Chahton Pe Tumhe
Jo Likha Ye Shiqayaton Bhara Qalaam Hai.

Yahi Khata Thi Ki Tootkar Chaha, Shayad
Issliye Diye Tumne Mujhey Ye Inaam Hai

Aey Mehfil Men Karne Wale Rushwa Kabhi
Ake Dekh Kaise Guzrti Meri Bhi Sham Hai

Na Kar Yun Bina Jaane Koi Faisla-e-Dilbar
Mera To Aj Bhi Har Pal Tere Hi Naam Hai.

Tu Chahe Kitna B Gira De Nazron Se Magar
Mere Dil Men Aj Bhi Tera Wohi Muqam Hai.



Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Andaaz-e-bayaan Hai..

bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: March 27, 2010, 07:19:56 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on March 25, 2010, 08:04:33 PM
Aapne kalam jarur chalaya hai Geet ji par uska rishta to dil se hi hai...

dil aur kalam me fark hi kitna hai,
ek me dard rehta hai dusre me syahi,
dil ka dard kam hone ka naam nahi leti,
aur na khatam hoti hai kalam ki syahi...



ji sahi kaha apne...

Kalam likhti hai haal-e-dil,
dil karta hai bayan ehsas ko lafzo se,
dono ka rishta sanso se hota hai..
aur dono ki shuruwat bhi hoti hai jazbato se......
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«Reply #14 on: March 27, 2010, 07:39:39 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on March 25, 2010, 09:23:50 PM
Kiya Hi Kab Tha Tumne Izhaar-e-Muhabat
Jo Aaj Lagaaye Mere Sar Itne Ilzaam Hai.

Kya Itna Hi Yakin Tha Chahton Pe Tumhe
Jo Likha Ye Shiqayaton Bhara Qalaam Hai.

Yahi Khata Thi Ki Tootkar Chaha, Shayad
Issliye Diye Tumne Mujhey Ye Inaam Hai

Aey Mehfil Men Karne Wale Rushwa Kabhi
Ake Dekh Kaise Guzrti Meri Bhi Sham Hai

Na Kar Yun Bina Jaane Koi Faisla-e-Dilbar
Mera To Aj Bhi Har Pal Tere Hi Naam Hai.

Tu Chahe Kitna B Gira De Nazron Se Magar
Mere Dil Men Aj Bhi Tera Wohi Muqam Hai.


Bahut hi khoob jawab diya hai shihab ji apne...Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  Applause Applause Applause Applause


Terre har dard ka andaza hai mujhe,
kabhi tune merri bolti khamoshi ko dekha,

tu hi tha hamare rishte ki shuruwat karne wala,
kabhi tune merri tadap ko merri baato mein dekha,

aaj tujhe merre ilzamo se hazaro gile hain,
kabhi merri chahto ki hadh ko tune parakhke dekha,

kitni asani se tu kehta raha ki nhi ji payega merre bina,
kabhi tune merri nigaho mein chhipe terre aks ko dekha,

tu tou diwana tha apni hi dhun mein..
kabhi terri judai mein merri jaagi ankho ko aur unme ruke hue paani ko dekha,

aur kya saboot du ki chahti hu tujhe main..
kabhi tune merre lafzo mein basi terri mhbt ki kahani ko dekha......
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