Chhoda hai...

by brokenbyluv on March 24, 2010, 07:11:24 PM
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«Reply #30 on: April 02, 2010, 01:38:47 PM »
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Shukriya Nikhaar ji...!!!

Quote from: Nikhaar on March 28, 2010, 03:48:35 PM
Bahut hi khoob Sahihab ji....aapne iss thread ka rang aur bhi badha diya.....
Yu hi likhte rahiye...... Clapping Smiley

Klaskar ji khoob saath diya aapne bbl ji ka...... Applause Applause
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«Reply #31 on: April 02, 2010, 03:39:12 PM »
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Bahut khoob Geet ji... maafi chahunga reply late kar raha hoon... darasal maine dekha nahi tha aapka post... aj hi dekha... bahut achcha likha hai aapne...

kalam to bas ek bahana hai,
ehsaas-e-mohabbat likhta hai dil,
saanson ka bandhan aksar tut jaata hai,
chalti hai kalam aur rota hai dil...

Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 27, 2010, 07:19:56 PM
ji sahi kaha apne...

Kalam likhti hai haal-e-dil,
dil karta hai bayan ehsas ko lafzo se,
dono ka rishta sanso se hota hai..
aur dono ki shuruwat bhi hoti hai jazbato se......
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«Reply #32 on: April 02, 2010, 06:57:46 PM »
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koi baat nhi kapil ji maafi ki zarurat nhi..bahut khoob baat kahi apne...


Hum apna dard likhte hai tou zamana hasta hai,
koi hamare alfazo mein likhe dard ko nhi dekhta,
hum tou tadap k kalam chalane lagte hai..
per koi syahi mein mile hamare ansuo ko nhi dekhta......
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«Reply #33 on: April 03, 2010, 07:58:39 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji....!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 01, 2010, 07:56:34 PM
Wah bahut khoob Shihab ji,Geet ji,Kapil ji.bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likha aap sabne.really touched.great work.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #34 on: April 03, 2010, 08:22:41 AM »
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Bahut pyara likha hai aapne Geet ji... dard ko har koi nahi samajh sakta... Jo na samjhe unke liye q aansu bahana...

na ho udaas agar koi tere gham pe hasta hai,
kalam k chalne ko zamana pagalpan samajhta hai,
aasun bhare alfaaz to khaamosh hote hain,
dil k likhe ko to bas dil samajhta hai...

Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 02, 2010, 06:57:46 PM
koi baat nhi kapil ji maafi ki zarurat nhi..bahut khoob baat kahi apne...


Hum apna dard likhte hai tou zamana hasta hai,
koi hamare alfazo mein likhe dard ko nhi dekhta,
hum tou tadap k kalam chalane lagte hai..
per koi syahi mein mile hamare ansuo ko nhi dekhta......
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«Reply #35 on: April 03, 2010, 12:51:53 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on April 03, 2010, 08:22:41 AM
Bahut pyara likha hai aapne Geet ji... dard ko har koi nahi samajh sakta... Jo na samjhe unke liye q aansu bahana...

na ho udaas agar koi tere gham pe hasta hai,
kalam k chalne ko zamana pagalpan samajhta hai,
aasun bhare alfaaz to khaamosh hote hain,
dil k likhe ko to bas dil samajhta hai...


shukriya kapil ji aur bahut khoob jawab mein likha hai apne...



Sochte the ki ankho mein basne wale,
mhbt ko hi apna khuda maan lete hai,
pujte hai apne sanam ko raat din..
aur unki har dukhti dhadkan ko pehchaan lete hai......
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«Reply #36 on: April 03, 2010, 01:34:59 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on April 03, 2010, 01:29:36 PM

Bahut Bahut Shukariya Geet Ji Pasand Farmane K Liye
Aapne Bhi Bahut Achcha Jawaab Diya Hai...




shukriya shihab ji...
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«Reply #37 on: April 03, 2010, 01:51:09 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on April 03, 2010, 01:34:36 PM
Bahut Khub Klaskar Ji Aur Geet Ji
Achchi Jugalbandi Hai Keep It Up...

Shukriya shihab ji pasand karne k liye...
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«Reply #38 on: April 03, 2010, 09:36:34 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Shihab ji...!!!

Quote from: Shihab on April 03, 2010, 01:34:36 PM
Bahut Khub Klaskar Ji Aur Geet Ji
Achchi Jugalbandi Hai Keep It Up...
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«Reply #39 on: April 03, 2010, 10:07:15 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji... par aapse ek sawaal hai chhota sa... aap ek taraf to mohabbat ko khuda banake pooj rahe ho aur ye bhi keh rahe ho ki unki dukhti dhadkan ko pehchaan lete ho... par khuda ko to dard nahi hota na ?

aankhon me basaake poojte ho maangte ho humein humse kyu,
sach kaho agar pyar hai to fir dil me itna ghum hai kyu,
kehte khuda humein ho tum to hoga humein fir dard kyun,
agar khuda ko dard ho to fir naam hai "khuda" hi kyun...

Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 03, 2010, 12:51:53 PM
shukriya kapil ji aur bahut khoob jawab mein likha hai apne...



Sochte the ki ankho mein basne wale,
mhbt ko hi apna khuda maan lete hai,
pujte hai apne sanam ko raat din..
aur unki har dukhti dhadkan ko pehchaan lete hai......
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«Reply #40 on: April 06, 2010, 10:36:39 AM »
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shukriya kapil ji..kapil ji khuda ko dard hota hai zarur hota hai jab vo apne hi banaye insaan ko kisika dil dunkhate ye koi aur galat kaam karte dekhte hai tou unhe bhi takleef hoti hai..jab hum kisi pe aetbaar karte hai aur hamara dil koi dukhata hai tou hum kitne toot jaate hai...per vo khuda hai aur vo ye sab dekhke bhi apne bande ko uske haq ki cheez dene se parhez nhi karte..isliye tou vo khuda hai aur hum maamuli se insaan...isliye main sochti thi ki pyar karne wale kabhi khudgarzz nhi hote..per kehte hai naa ki hath ki pancho ungliya ek si nhi hoti...


Dard ka koi ant nhi hota,
naa hi uski koi hadh hoti hai,
insaan ho ya khuda ek baat sach hai..
aetbaar ki zarurat dono taraf hoti hai......
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«Reply #41 on: April 06, 2010, 04:08:54 PM »
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bahut sahi kaha aapne Geet ji... aapki baat se poori tarah sehmat hoon... par sab kuch to usi khuda ka hi banaya hua hai na ... kuch achcha hota hai to wo bhi khuda hi karwaata hai aur bura hota hai wo bhi... wo to bas upar baithe muskurata rehta hai... agar usko dard hota to wo kabhi bhi hume dard nahi deta... us khuda ko to shayad dard ka matlab bhi nahi pata hoga... dard se tadapte hum hain aur usko lagta hoga ki hum usi me khush ho rahe hain...

dard agar hota khuda ko to insaan tadapta nahi,
hoti khushiyaan har taraf dard na hota kahi,
ishq hi hota jahaan me koi bewafaa hota nahi,
aap hote, hum bhi hote, ye baatein tab hoti nahi...
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«Reply #42 on: April 07, 2010, 08:09:30 PM »
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kapil ji khuda hamein jism deta hai,jaan deta hai,dil deta hai,dhadkan deta hai sab kuch dekar vo hamein iss zamane k kaabil banata hai...bus hamein apni zindgi ko sahi raah mein kaise jina hai ye vo hum per chhod deta hai..jab vo itna sab kuch karta hai hamare liye tou kya hum uske liye dard mein muskura nhi sakte..shikwe gile na karte hue usi mein khush rehne ki koshish kyun nhi kar sakte jo usne hamein diya hai..dard khuda ka hi banaya ehsas hai per khushi bhi tou usi ki den hai..tou jab hum khushi mein gile nhi karte tou dard mein kyun kare...think hai naa ji...


Har haal mein jina hi tou zindgi hai,
khushi mein shikwe nhi tou gum mein kaise gile,
khuda ansu k sang muskaan bhi tou deta hai..
aur hum khush hai hamein dono mein se chahe jo bhi mile......
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«Reply #43 on: April 08, 2010, 03:45:44 PM »
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Bahut khoob kaha aapne geet ji...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Chaliye ye bhi sahi hai. Jab aapne keh diya to humein manna hi padega. Ab hum dard se hi rishta jod lete hain bina kisi shikayat k...

har dard ko ab sehna hoga, har ghum me muskurana hoga,
chahe koi saanse bhi maang le, haste haste de dena hoga,
ab humein na kabhi dard hoga, har dard ab bedard hoga,
hanske sahenge har zulm ko, ab ghum hi apna humdard hoga...
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«Reply #44 on: April 08, 2010, 04:47:27 PM »
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Wah Kya Baaat hai Hai Geet Ji & Kapil Bhai.. Behad khubsoorat Jugalbandi chal rahi Hai.. Is Silsile ko jaari Rakhiyega...!! Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause



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