Chhoda hai...

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«Reply #45 on: April 08, 2010, 05:21:33 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Mann ji... !!!

Wah Kya Baaat hai Hai Geet Ji & Kapil Bhai.. Behad khubsoorat Jugalbandi chal rahi Hai.. Is Silsile ko jaari Rakhiyega...!! Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #46 on: April 08, 2010, 06:17:38 PM »
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Wah Kya Baaat hai Hai Geet Ji & Kapil Bhai.. Behad khubsoorat Jugalbandi chal rahi Hai.. Is Silsile ko jaari Rakhiyega...!! Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause



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bahut bahut shukriya mann ji...kapil ji ka sath raha tou ye daur yu hi chalta rahega...
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«Reply #47 on: April 08, 2010, 06:31:22 PM »
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Geet ji... humse jab tak ho paega hum poora poora saath nibhayenge....abhi hume aapke jawab ka intezaar hai... !!!

bahut bahut shukriya mann ji...kapil ji ka sath raha tou ye daur yu hi chalta rahega...
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«Reply #48 on: April 08, 2010, 06:35:33 PM »
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Bahut khoob kaha aapne geet ji...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Chaliye ye bhi sahi hai. Jab aapne keh diya to humein manna hi padega. Ab hum dard se hi rishta jod lete hain bina kisi shikayat k...

har dard ko ab sehna hoga, har ghum me muskurana hoga,
chahe koi saanse bhi maang le, haste haste de dena hoga,
ab humein na kabhi dard hoga, har dard ab bedard hoga,
hanske sahenge har zulm ko, ab ghum hi apna humdard hoga...


Shukriya kapil ji..per jaisa apka dil kahe aap wahi kare..jo merre dil ne kaha maine apse kaha...khiar chahe jo bhi ho gum aur dard tou zinsgi ki sachai hai aur iss sachai se aaj tak koi nhi bach paya hai...chaliye ab wapis shayari pe ajate hai...

bahut khoob likha hai apne..

Zaruri nhi ki har zakham ka ilaaj ho,
kuch zakham khule reh jate hai,
kayi rasto pe humsafar mil jate hai..
tou kayi ansuo se dhule reh jate hai......
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«Reply #49 on: April 08, 2010, 06:40:02 PM »
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Geet ji... humse jab tak ho paega hum poora poora saath nibhayenge....abhi hume aapke jawab ka intezaar hai... !!!


shukriya kapil ji..
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«Reply #50 on: April 08, 2010, 06:45:17 PM »
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 Welcome Banner ji
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«Reply #51 on: April 08, 2010, 07:03:36 PM »
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Sahi kaha Geet ji aapne... zindagi ki sachchai hi hai gham aur dard... par agar hum har ghum ko muskurate huye seh lenge to dard bhari zindagi ka bhi mazaa le paenge...

Aur bahut hi khoobsurat jawab diya hai aapne...

zakhm to ek bahana hai khud to rulane ka,
muskaan hi bas raasta hai ghamo ko bhulane ka,
jaroori nahi har raahi ko hamsafar mil jaaye,
zindagi ek safar hai bas chalte jaane ka...


Shukriya kapil ji..per jaisa apka dil kahe aap wahi kare..jo merre dil ne kaha maine apse kaha...khiar chahe jo bhi ho gum aur dard tou zinsgi ki sachai hai aur iss sachai se aaj tak koi nhi bach paya hai...chaliye ab wapis shayari pe ajate hai...

bahut khoob likha hai apne..

Zaruri nhi ki har zakham ka ilaaj ho,
kuch zakham khule reh jate hai,
kayi rasto pe humsafar mil jate hai..
tou kayi ansuo se dhule reh jate hai......
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«Reply #52 on: April 08, 2010, 07:44:10 PM »
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Wah wah Kapil dost aur Geet jee..bahaut khoob! Applause Applause

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«Reply #53 on: April 08, 2010, 08:09:00 PM »
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shukriya rahim ji...
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«Reply #54 on: April 08, 2010, 08:14:44 PM »
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Sahi kaha Geet ji aapne... zindagi ki sachchai hi hai gham aur dard... par agar hum har ghum ko muskurate huye seh lenge to dard bhari zindagi ka bhi mazaa le paenge...

Aur bahut hi khoobsurat jawab diya hai aapne...

zakhm to ek bahana hai khud to rulane ka,
muskaan hi bas raasta hai ghamo ko bhulane ka,
jaroori nahi har raahi ko hamsafar mil jaaye,
zindagi ek safar hai bas chalte jaane ka...



Ji sahi kaha apne..kehte hai naa..
haste haste kat jaye raste zindgi yu hi chalti rahe,
khushi mile ya gum badlenge naa hum duniya chahe badalti rahe...

aur bahut khoob baat kahi aaapne apne alfazo mein...


Chalte chalte ek din manzil mil jayegi,
humein bhi apne sapno ki haqiqat mil jayegi,
jab vo rakhenge kadam hamari zindgi mein..
iss duniya mein hamein apni shakhsiyat mil jayegi......
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«Reply #55 on: April 08, 2010, 08:16:19 PM »
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Again, Nice one Geet jee..
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«Reply #56 on: April 08, 2010, 08:17:18 PM »
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Woh aye toh the zindagi main meri yaaron,
Meri shaksiyat nahin; yaad banke rehgaye...
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«Reply #57 on: April 08, 2010, 08:48:40 PM »
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shukriya rahim ji aur bahut hi badhiya likha hai ji...


Zamana mujhe uske kareeb aane nhi deta..
aur uski yad hai ki use bhulane nhi deti......
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«Reply #58 on: April 08, 2010, 08:53:10 PM »
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Shukriya aur Nice one Geet jee..
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«Reply #59 on: April 08, 2010, 09:02:06 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji... manzil ab dur nahi hai... aur bahut pyaara gana share kiya hai aapne.... aur wo manzil humein tabhi milegi jab hamare sapne sach honge isiliye main aajkal apne sapno me sachchai dhundne ki koshish karta hoon...

na zameen apni aur na apna aakaash hai,
humko bhi ab to usi manzil ki talash hai,
kehta hoon tumse ek baat jo ki kuch khaas hai,
sapno me bhi aaj humko sachchai ki talaash hai...


Ji sahi kaha apne..kehte hai naa..
haste haste kat jaye raste zindgi yu hi chalti rahe,
khushi mile ya gum badlenge naa hum duniya chahe badalti rahe...

aur bahut khoob baat kahi aaapne apne alfazo mein...


Chalte chalte ek din manzil mil jayegi,
humein bhi apne sapno ki haqiqat mil jayegi,
jab vo rakhenge kadam hamari zindgi mein..
iss duniya mein hamein apni shakhsiyat mil jayegi......
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