Baat sey baat chhupaaou, to kuchh kahoon tum sey!

by abdbundeli on November 07, 2008, 07:28:48 PM
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Nazar, nazar sey milaaou, to kuchh kahoon tum sey!
Tahal qareeb to aaou: to kuchh kahoon tum sey!

Qareeb hain, jawaan bhi, zouq-e-guftgoo to ho!
Naqaab-e-syaah hataaou, to kuchh kahoon tum sey!

Saath ahbaab hain: sahee hai! Maantaa hoon mein!
Naye qayaam banaaou, to kuchh kahoon tum sey!

Raqeeb hongey yahaan bhi, ou nigaahbaanee bhi;
Baat sey baat chhupaaou, to kuchh kahoon tum sey!

'Abd' ney baarhaa jalwah-e-yaar deykhaa hai:
Wahee jalaal dikhaaou: to kuchh kahoon tum sey!


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«Reply #1 on: November 07, 2008, 08:45:32 PM »
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teri tarah andaze baayan abd
jo main kar paoo, to kuch kahu tumse
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«Reply #2 on: November 07, 2008, 09:39:52 PM »
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teri tarah andaze baayan abd
jo main kar paoo, to kuch kahu tumse
sajid_ghayel ji!
Waqt lagtaa hai ishq-e-gulbadan ko paaney mein!
Warnah hain laakhoun-lakh husn-e-nou zamaaney mein!
Nazar to aatey hain kitney hi, 'abd',  gulcheyhrey;
Umra kat jaatee hai, par, eik us key aaney mein!!

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«Reply #3 on: November 07, 2008, 09:46:40 PM »
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sajid_ghayel ji!
Waqt lagtaa hai ishq-e-gulbadan ko paaney mein!
Warnah hain laakhoun-lakh husn-e-nou zamaaney mein!
Nazar to aatey hain kitney hi, 'abd',  gulcheyhrey;
Umra kat jaatee hai, par, eik us key aaney mein!!

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mere aane ki baat karte hain
aur mera nam bhi nahi lete
ghayel se tera rishta kya abd
aakhir tum q nahi kehte
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«Reply #4 on: November 07, 2008, 10:07:15 PM »
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bahoot khoob Abd ji.

Nice lines SG
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«Reply #5 on: November 07, 2008, 10:16:02 PM »
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sajid_ghayel ji!
Ye rishtah hai katm-e-adam ka, ae Ghayel,
Yeh rishtah hai mittee ki khushboo ka gahraa!
Yeh us sarzameen ki hawaa ka hai rishtah,
Jahaan, sabzbakhtee kaa rahtaa hai pahraa!!

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«Reply #6 on: November 07, 2008, 10:17:20 PM »
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Thanks a lot, Pooja ji!
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oye yaar isse khoobsurat rishta to koi ho hi nahi sakta abd agar tu samne hota to tuje apne gale se laga leta anyway pooja main to ek mamuli shayer hu yaar bas abd ki shayri ka jawab dete dete mujme nikhar aa gaya hain par tu bhi bada solid likhti par afsos kam likhti hain
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«Reply #8 on: November 07, 2008, 10:51:42 PM »
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sajid_ghayel ji,
Too, eik zarrah zameen kaa uthhaa, lagaa ley galey!
Eik zarrey ko yahaan mein bhi uthhaa leytaa hoon!!
Wahee hawaa, wahee zameen hai, nosh-e-jannat see;
Mein tujhey jigar-o-dil key saath lagaataa hoon galey!!
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«Reply #9 on: November 07, 2008, 10:57:22 PM »
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kash tera mera koi rishta hota
kash mai tuje haq se apna kehta
mujme aib hai itne tu kal bhula de muje
kash kuch wajah hoti jo tu mujse abd juda hota
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«Reply #10 on: November 07, 2008, 11:12:19 PM »
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bahoot khoob Abd ji and SG !!
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«Reply #11 on: November 08, 2008, 12:05:55 AM »
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Nazar, nazar sey milaaou, to kuchh kahoon tum sey!
Tahal qareeb to aaou: to kuchh kahoon tum sey!

Qareeb hain, jawaan bhi, zouq-e-guftgoo to ho!
Naqaab-e-syaah hataaou, to kuchh kahoon tum sey!

Saath ahbaab hain: sahee hai! Maantaa hoon mein!
Naye qayaam banaaou, to kuchh kahoon tum sey!

Raqeeb hongey yahaan bhi, ou nigaahbaanee bhi;
Baat sey baat chhupaaou, to kuchh kahoon tum sey!

'Abd' ney baarhaa jalwah-e-yaar deykhaa hai:
Wahee jalaal dikhaaou: to kuchh kahoon tum sey!


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Very Beautiful Creation Abd Ji  Applause Applause

Nice contributions Sajid Ji  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #12 on: November 08, 2008, 08:38:35 AM »
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Thanks a lot, Sajid ji/Pooja ji/Celmira ji!
Kash ham eik jagah hotey, guftagoo kartey:
Baatoun-baatoun mein din-o-shaam sey raateyn kartey!!

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Bahut Khoob.
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Bahut Khoob.

Shukriyah!
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