be rukhee,,,ghazal,,,jeet jainam saini

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kiyon aalam e tanhaayi thee,
be rukhee  lout  aayi  thee,

qafas e mohhobat main faske,
meri jaan neekal  aayi thee,

woh sanam harjaayi  nikalaa,
jisne meri rooh mitayi thee,

din mahine saal  gujare par,
woh loutke  naa  aayi  thee,

ahal e zahaa,n  roya  bohat,
jab  dastaan  sunaayi  thee,

zakham  itne  milte gaye ke,
mohhobat  rog ban aayi thee,

armaan tha didaar e yaar ka,
aakhiri ghadi jab aayi thee,

ishq karna  gunah  hai jeet,
logo ne aksr samjhaayi thee,

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«Reply #1 on: February 25, 2015, 07:14:05 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 25, 2015, 07:33:13 PM »
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bohat bohat shukriya ravi sir ji rau or daaaaad kabool
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«Reply #5 on: February 25, 2015, 08:12:27 PM »
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bahut khoob Jeet ji....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: February 25, 2015, 09:17:55 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Jeet Jee, dherooooN dheroooooooooN daaaaaaaaaaaaaD RAU ke saath.
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bohat bohat shukriya surinder sir ji daaaaddd or kabool
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Bahut hi umda peshkash. dheron daad. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Waah , bahut khooooob  Applause Applause
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shukriya raji ji daaaaaadddddd kabool
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