Beygunaah: jo un kee zad mein aa gaye!

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Beygunaah: jo un kee zad mein aa gaye!
Khoon sey apney majeed, nahaa gaye!

Mushkilain hee mushkilain theen raah mein;
Har dagar par haadishey takraa gaye!

Azal sey daharoun rahey haiwaan jo:
'Aaj bhee haiwaan hain!', batlaa gaye!!

Khoon-e-insaan pee, huye woh beynaqaab;
Ham dobaarah, haaya, dhokaa khaa gaye!

Shakl-o-soorat aadmee kee paa, 'abd',
Aadmee ban, aadmee ko khaa gaye!

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«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2008, 03:40:16 AM »
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bahoot khoob Abd ji!!
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bahoot khoob Abd ji!!
Pooja ji! Thanks! I'm happy you liked it!
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«Reply #3 on: December 10, 2008, 10:40:22 AM »
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Beygunaah: jo un kee zad mein aa gaye!
Khoon sey apney majeed, nahaa gaye!

Mushkilain hee mushkilain theen raah mein;
Har dagar par haadishey takraa gaye!

Azal sey daharoun rahey haiwaan jo:
'Aaj bhee haiwaan hain!', batlaa gaye!!

Khoon-e-insaan pee, huye woh beynaqaab;
Ham dobaarah, haaya, dhokaa khaa gaye!

Shakl-o-soorat aadmee kee paa, 'abd',
Aadmee ban, aadmee ko khaa gaye!

                 - abd bundeli



Bahut Acha, Abd Ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 10, 2008, 11:40:53 AM »
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Bahut Acha, Abd Ji
Haardik dhanyawaad Deepati ji!
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