Chain Ghazal (tarah misrah pe likhi gayee ghazlen)

by dr.ammarax on March 30, 2011, 08:59:05 PM
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AslamuALaikum, Hi friends ...
I thought to start an intresting topic.. here we will present a verse from some ghazal and try to elaborate it further..
koi bhi us mein shayr add kr sakta hay
aur aakhir mein usko aik hatmi shakal de kar ... is forum k senior poets se uski ghaltiyan sahi karwa kr respective forum mein post ki jayegi ...kya khayal hay ap sab ka is baray mein?

lehaza aaghaz k liye mein aik misra likh rahi hun

Shayd der laga di mein nay khud se bahir aanay mein
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«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2011, 05:55:40 AM »
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yun ki ab kya kahen hum kuch samjh nahi sake mohtarma…
par hum kosis karne se chukenge nahi
……
””
shayad der laga di maine khud se bahar aane me

kya karta mai uljha tha kuch waqt ko suljhaane me to kuch dooba tha aansuon ke paimaane me
””
ab jab samjhunga to shayad kuch abcha sa soch paunga.

thanx
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«Reply #2 on: July 14, 2017, 03:23:37 PM »
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Khuda ko dhundne chala hun, khud Ki pehchan na bana paya zamaane mein
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