BEET GAYEE SO BAAT GAYEE...By Harivansh Rai Bachhanji

by KOYAL46 on October 28, 2009, 11:53:57 PM
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Kavita jagat k tejasvee kavi Shri Harivanshrai Bachan ji ki ek kavita jo mujhe behad pasand hai...aap sab ko uska aanand lene k liye pesh kar rahi hu.....Jaanti hu bahut se logo ne ese kai kai baar padha hoga......

BEET GAYEE SO BAAT GAYEE

Jeevan mein ek sitara tha
Maana woh behad pyara tha
Woh doob gaya to doob gaya
Ambar ke aanan ko dekho
Kitne iske tare toote
Kitne iske pyare chhoote
Jo chhoot gaye phir kahan mile
Par bolo toote taron par
Kab ambar shok manata hai

(Ambar –aasmaan , Shok -dukhi hona)

Jo beet gayi so baat gayi ....

Jeewan mein tha who ek kusum
The us pe nitya nyochawar tum
Wo sookh gaya to sookh gaya
Madhuwan ki chaati ko dekho
Sookhi kitni iski kaliyan
Jo murjhai phir kahan khili
Par bolo sookhe phoolon pe
Kab madhuvan shok manata hai ?

(Kusum-flower , Nitya-hamesha, nyochawar- dedicated, madhuvan- gulshan)

Jo beet gayi so baat gayi

Jeewan mein madhu ka pyala tha
Tumne tan man de daala tha
Woh toot gaya to toot gaya
Madiralay ka aangan dekho
Kitne pyaale hil jaate hain
Gir mitti mein mil jate hain
Jo girte hain kab uthte hain
Par bolo toote pyalon mein kab madiralay pachtata hai ?

(Madhu-sharab, madiralaya-sharabkhana, pachtana-repent)

Jo beet gayi so baat gayi

Mridu mitti ke hain bane huye
Madhu ghat phoota hi kartein hain
Laghu jeewan leke aaye hain
Pyale toota hi karte hain
Phir bhi madiralay ke andar
Madhu ke ghat madhu ke pyale hain
Jo madakta ke mare hain
Wo madhu loota hi karte hain
Wo kachcha peene wala hai
Jiski mamta ghat pyalon par
Jo sachche madhu se jala hua
Kab rota hai chillata hai?

(Mridu-soft, ghat-pyaala, laghu- chota, madakta-masti, mamta-prem)

Jo beet gayi so baat gayi ......
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2009, 06:07:52 PM »
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Sach mea Bahoot Bahoot Sunder Rachna hai.. Main tho is kabil nahi ki unki rachna ki tareef bhi karun.. But unni likhi har kavita mea ak sachai jalakati nazar aai hai..

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«Reply #2 on: October 31, 2009, 11:46:02 AM »
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Koyal Ji thnx for sharing this poem Bacchan ji ki meine bahut c peoms padhi hai ye bhi unme ek hai
Jab hum school me jate the tab unki poems humari book me thi ye poems bhi bahut hi acchi lagi padhkar thnx koyal ji jo aapne itni beautiful poem ko share kiya
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«Reply #3 on: November 03, 2009, 04:13:47 PM »
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Thanks a lot Divya-di.....

Sach mea Bahoot Bahoot Sunder Rachna hai.. Main tho is kabil nahi ki unki rachna ki tareef bhi karun.. But unni likhi har kavita mea ak sachai jalakati nazar aai hai..

Thank you Koyal for sharing it here !
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«Reply #4 on: November 03, 2009, 04:15:29 PM »
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My favourite too Rishiji.....Thank you so much....for encouraging me.....

Koyal Ji thnx for sharing this poem Bacchan ji ki meine bahut c peoms padhi hai ye bhi unme ek hai
Jab hum school me jate the tab unki poems humari book me thi ye poems bhi bahut hi acchi lagi padhkar thnx koyal ji jo aapne itni beautiful poem ko share kiya
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«Reply #5 on: June 30, 2010, 01:06:11 PM »
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BEET GAYEE SO BAAT GAYEE

Jeevan mein ek sitara tha
Maana woh behad pyara tha
Woh doob gaya to doob gaya
Ambar ke aanan ko dekho
Kitne iske tare toote
Kitne iske pyare chhoote
Jo chhoot gaye phir kahan mile
Par bolo toote taron par
Kab ambar shok manata hai

(Ambar –aasmaan , Shok -dukhi hona)

Jo beet gayi so baat gayi ....

Jeewan mein tha who ek kusum
The us pe nitya nyochawar tum
Wo sookh gaya to sookh gaya
Madhuwan ki chaati ko dekho
Sookhi kitni iski kaliyan
Jo murjhai phir kahan khili
Par bolo sookhe phoolon pe
Kab madhuvan shok manata hai ?

(Kusum-flower , Nitya-hamesha, nyochawar- dedicated, madhuvan- gulshan)

Jo beet gayi so baat gayi

Jeewan mein madhu ka pyala tha
Tumne tan man de daala tha
Woh toot gaya to toot gaya
Madiralay ka aangan dekho
Kitne pyaale hil jaate hain
Gir mitti mein mil jate hain
Jo girte hain kab uthte hain
Par bolo toote pyalon mein kab madiralay pachtata hai ?

(Madhu-sharab, madiralaya-sharabkhana, pachtana-repent)

Jo beet gayi so baat gayi

Mridu mitti ke hain bane huye
Madhu ghat phoota hi kartein hain
Laghu jeewan leke aaye hain
Pyale toota hi karte hain
Phir bhi madiralay ke andar
Madhu ke ghat madhu ke pyale hain
Jo madakta ke mare hain
Wo madhu loota hi karte hain
Wo kachcha peene wala hai
Jiski mamta ghat pyalon par
Jo sachche madhu se jala hua
Kab rota hai chillata hai?

(Mridu-soft, ghat-pyaala, laghu- chota, madakta-masti, mamta-prem)

Jo beet gayi so baat gayi ......
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«Reply #6 on: June 30, 2010, 01:41:05 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: June 30, 2010, 04:57:50 PM »
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I am sharing some stanzas of Madhushaala   
MADHUSHAALA

Mrudu bhaavo ke anguro ki
aaj bana laaya haala
priyatam, apne haatho se
aaj pilaaonga pyaala ;
pehle bhog laga loo tujhko
fir prasad jag paayega
sabase pehle tera swagat
karti meri madhushala




Pyaas tujhe to, vishv tapaakar
poorn nikaalonga haala,
ek paanv se saaki bankar
naachunga lekar pyaala
jeevan ki madhuta to tere
upar kab ka vaar chuka
aaj nyochavar kar doonga mai
tujh par jag ki madhushaala



Priyatam, tu meri haala hai,
mai tera pyaasa pyaala,
apne ko mujhme bharkar
tubanta hai peenevaala;
mai tujhko chak chalka karta
mast mujhe pee tu hota
ek doosre ko ham dono
aaj paraspar madhushala

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«Reply #8 on: October 08, 2011, 11:54:05 AM »
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it is really true lines for everyone
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«Reply #9 on: October 11, 2011, 04:21:55 AM »
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love9 tearyeyedi love that poem beet gai so baat gai.i lost my sister couple months back.when i heard that poem it gave me some kind of calmness and support.thanks to bachhan ji.
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«Reply #10 on: July 17, 2012, 03:45:20 PM »
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i loved this poem and i wanted this for my love so thanx love9
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«Reply #11 on: July 30, 2012, 05:24:26 PM »
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BEET GAYEE SO BAAT GAYEE
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«Reply #12 on: September 07, 2012, 12:33:27 PM »
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BEET GAYEE SO BAAT GAYEE

Jeevan mein ek sitara tha
Maana woh behad pyara tha
Woh doob gaya to doob gaya
Ambar ke aanan ko dekho
Kitne iske tare toote
Kitne iske pyare chhoote
Jo chhoot gaye phir kahan mile
Par bolo toote taron par
Kab ambar shok manata hai

(Ambar –aasmaan , Shok -dukhi hona)

Jo beet gayi so baat gayi ....

Jeewan mein tha who ek kusum
The us pe nitya nyochawar tum
Wo sookh gaya to sookh gaya
Madhuwan ki chaati ko dekho
Sookhi kitni iski kaliyan
Jo murjhai phir kahan khili
Par bolo sookhe phoolon pe
Kab madhuvan shok manata hai ?

(Kusum-flower , Nitya-hamesha, nyochawar- dedicated, madhuvan- gulshan)

Jo beet gayi so baat gayi

Jeewan mein madhu ka pyala tha
Tumne tan man de daala tha
Woh toot gaya to toot gaya
Madiralay ka aangan dekho
Kitne pyaale hil jaate hain
Gir mitti mein mil jate hain
Jo girte hain kab uthte hain
Par bolo toote pyalon mein kab madiralay pachtata hai ?

(Madhu-sharab, madiralaya-sharabkhana, pachtana-repent)

Jo beet gayi so baat gayi

Mridu mitti ke hain bane huye
Madhu ghat phoota hi kartein hain
Laghu jeewan leke aaye hain
Pyale toota hi karte hain
Phir bhi madiralay ke andar
Madhu ke ghat madhu ke pyale hain
Jo madakta ke mare hain
Wo madhu loota hi karte hain
Wo kachcha peene wala hai
Jiski mamta ghat pyalon par
Jo sachche madhu se jala hua
Kab rota hai chillata hai?

(Mridu-soft, ghat-pyaala, laghu- chota, madakta-masti, mamta-prem)

Jo beet gayi so baat gayi ......

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«Reply #13 on: June 05, 2013, 07:30:58 AM »
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 wave  :clap:Awesome I like it....inspirational!!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: August 28, 2013, 07:14:57 PM »
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जो बीत गई सो बात गई
मोती के दानों से भू पर
बूंदे टपटप कर गिरती हैं
जग से मानो यह कहती हैं
जितने तारे नभ के टुटे
जितने प्यारे उसके छुटे
उन टुटे तारों पर ही तो
यह अम्बर अश्रु बहाता है
अम्बर भी शोक मनाता है
यह व्याथा तुम्हारा कहना है
जो बीत गई सो बात गई

गरमी के दुपहर में देखो
सर सर लपटें जब चलती हैं
पीले पल्लव गिर पड्ते हैं
जग के कानों में कहते हं
मधुबन की सूखीं जो कलियाँ
मुरझाई जितनी वलरियाँ
उन सूखी कलियों पर ही तो
यह मधुबन शोर मचाता है
कैसे मानूँ इस जीवन में
जो बीत गई सो बात गई

मुझे भी रो लेने दो
समय की आंधी जब चलती है
सब कुछ बहा ले जाती है
फिर यदा कदा कौन दो
आँखों को नम करती रहती है
धीरे से कानों में कहती है
मैं नहीं जंजीर पैरों की
भुत हुँ तुमको कुछ सिखलाती हुँ
मैं ही इतिहास बनाती हुँ
नहीं मानती, जो बीत गई सो बात गई
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