Janab Sajid Ghayal Saheb! Adab!
Kya zabardasht ghazal hai ye janab aapki. Matla to bahut hi zordaar hai aur baaqi k ashaar bhi kam nahin hain. Aapke ashaaron mein barjastagi hai aur kisi kisi sher mein to aisa lagta hai k wo sher bahut hi doob ke kaha gaya hai. Ye ghazal fikr ki tamaazat ko apne mein samete hue hai. Aisi fikr-angez ghazal k liye aap mubaarakbaad ke mustahaq haiN. Meri jaanib se hazaaron daad qubul kijiye. Aapki is ghazal ki zameen kuchh aisi dilkash hai k khaaksaar ne barjasta jo ash-aar kahe unhein aapki ghazal ki aqeedat mein pesh karne ki thaan li is ummeed k saath k aap is jasaarat ko qubul farmaayenge:
Mujhko lagta hai ye nayee hai abhi
Kya ghazal aapne kahi hai abhi
Haan ! tabiyat khili khili hai abhi
Us pe meri nazar paRi hai abhi
Khwaab palkon pe aa gaye pal mein
Bas nazar se nazar laRi hai abhi
Ghhup andhere mein dekhkar jugnu
Aik ummeed si jagi hai abhi
Faisla aaj aanewaala tha
Ik qayaamat thi jo tali hai abhi
Dil mein hasrat thi kal talak jiski
Dil ki nafrat wo ban gayee hai abhi
Tum ko paRhne ke baad hi GHAYEL
Tum se ulfat hi ho gayee hai abhi
(Waquif Ansari)
Ek nayee aag phir lagi hai abhi
Dil ki hasrat koi jali hai abhi
Kaun kehta hai door woh humse
Ek sadaa phir wahi suni hai abhi
Humse mayoos woh bhi rehte hai
Jinse rishta koi nahi hai abhi
Waqt_e_sajda khayaal aaya hai
Dil me khwaish koi buri hai abhi
Logh khud me dafan bhi hote hai
Dil me chahat kaiee dabi hai abhi
Jaisi marzi teri guzari hai
Jaisi kal thi zindagi hai abhi
Teri surat hai chand si lekin
Teri seerat kaha bhali hai abhi
Sajid Ghayel