Dil se juda..................................Aqsh

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Bahut roye hum, tujhe dil se juda karte hue
Nam aankhoN se, tere liye dua karte hue

Tanha shab bhar, karwateiN badalte rahe
Apne hi zakhmoN ki, dawa karte hue

Kaise mumkin tha ki, dhuaaN bhi na aaye
Mere jalte hue dil ko, hawa karte hue

Koi na jaane anjam, meri raah-e-ulfat ka
Toot chuke hai hum, tujhse wafa karte hue

KushiyoN ke lamho ko, udhaar lekar "Aqsh"
Zindagi guzar di humne, kisten ada karte hue
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«Reply #1 on: December 25, 2012, 11:27:11 AM »
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BOHUT UMDAA LIKHA HAI APNI SI KAHAANI LAGTI HAIN REALY TOUCHING LINES VERY GOOD LIKHTE RAHIYE ALWAYS EK RAU BHI APKA HUA
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«Reply #2 on: December 25, 2012, 11:34:34 AM »
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BOHUT UMDAA LIKHA HAI APNI SI KAHAANI LAGTI HAIN REALY TOUCHING LINES VERY GOOD LIKHTE RAHIYE ALWAYS EK RAU BHI APKA HUA
thanks sahill jee aur rau ke liye bhi bahut bahut thnx
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«Reply #3 on: December 25, 2012, 11:41:59 AM »
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Mere jalte huye dil ko hawa karte huye.... Waaah waah waah.
Sundar... Ati sundar ati sundar
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«Reply #4 on: December 25, 2012, 11:44:06 AM »
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bahut bahut Khub Aqsh Ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: December 25, 2012, 11:44:35 AM »
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Mere jalte huye dil ko hawa karte huye.... Waaah waah waah.
Sundar... Ati sundar ati sundar
thank you so much masoom
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«Reply #6 on: December 25, 2012, 11:45:05 AM »
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bahut bahut Khub Aqsh Ji Applause Applause Applause
thnx sanjeev jee
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«Reply #7 on: December 25, 2012, 11:50:58 AM »
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Bahut roye hum, tujhe dil se juda karte hue
Nam aankhoN se, tere liye dua karte hue

Tanha shab bhar, karwateiN badalte rahe
Apne hi zakhmoN ki, dawa karte hue

Kaise mumkin tha ki, dhuaaN bhi na aaye
Mere jalte hue dil ko, hawa karte hue

Koi na jaane anjam, meri raah-e-ulfat ka
Toot chuke hai hum, tujhse wafa karte hue

KushiyoN ke lamho ko, udhaar lekar "Aqsh"
Zindagi guzar di humne, kisten ada karte hue



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«Reply #8 on: December 25, 2012, 11:52:26 AM »
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KushiyoN ke lamho ko, udhaar lekar "Aqsh"
 Zindagi guzar di humne, kisten ada karte hue

waahh waahh kya sher likha hai Applause Applause

ba-khhooob likha hai Applause

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«Reply #9 on: December 25, 2012, 11:52:48 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: December 25, 2012, 11:53:43 AM »
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thank you so much qalb jee
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«Reply #11 on: December 25, 2012, 11:54:07 AM »
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KushiyoN ke lamho ko, udhaar lekar "Aqsh"
 Zindagi guzar di humne, kisten ada karte hue

waahh waahh kya sher likha hai Applause Applause

ba-khhooob likha hai Applause


thnx roy jee
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«Reply #12 on: December 25, 2012, 11:54:34 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
thank you anmol jee
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«Reply #13 on: December 25, 2012, 12:13:44 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Aqsh ji.. bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!

karke   waade   nibhaane   kaa   saath   umra  bhar
wo  humein  tohfe   me   bas   apni  yaad de gayaa

jinke   saath   sapno   ka    mahal   banaayaa  thaa
wo   humein   ek   tuti   huyi  buniyaad   de  gayaa

samajh  rahe   the  hum  apne  bandhan  to atoot
aur  wo  humein  bikhre  huye  jazbaat  de   gayaa

unke  aane  se  saare  rishte  tod   diye the humne
wo  humein  tanhaa  har  ek din aur raat de gayaa

jinke aansuon ko moti kehte rahe hum  umra bhar
woh humein aansuon ki haseen saugaat de  gayaa


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«Reply #14 on: December 25, 2012, 12:18:02 PM »
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Bahut roye hum, tujhe dil se juda karte hue
Nam aankhoN se, tere liye dua karte hue

Tanha shab bhar, karwateiN badalte rahe
Apne hi zakhmoN ki, dawa karte hue

Kaise mumkin tha ki, dhuaaN bhi na aaye
Mere jalte hue dil ko, hawa karte hue


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Koi na jaane anjam, meri raah-e-ulfat ka
Toot chuke hai hum, tujhse wafa karte hue

KushiyoN ke lamho ko, udhaar lekar "Aqsh"
Zindagi guzar di humne, kisten ada karte hue

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mind blowing Aqsh ji,,,,,,,
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