Hi I m Aqsh

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Hi every one. Mai yo india ki nayi member hoon.Mai ek housewife hoon.Mujhe sher o shayari ka shauq bahut pahele se tha. Lekin mujhe koi support nahi mila. Aaj mai koshish kar rahi hoon kuch likhne ki, halanki mere andar aisi koi khaas baat nahi hai. Mai saare members se request karti hoon ke woh meri tehreer ko jaroor pade, aur mere galthiyon ki nishaandehi kare, aur mujhe mere shauq ko poora karne me meri madad kare. Mai aap sabki ahsanmand rahungi.

Dil se mohabbat nibhate chale gaye,
Hum unke sitamon ko bhulate chale gaye.
Ashkon ko peekar muskurate chale gaye
Labon par unhi ka naam sajate chale gaye
Unki yaadon me aksar raaton ko jagkar
Kabhi hanste aur kabhi rote chale gaye
Milegi hame bhi ulfat bhari nazar
Ankhon me yehi khwab sajate chale gaye
Pyaar ke dard ko dil me dabakar
Hum wafa pe wafa karte chale gaye
Ho jayegi unhe bhi mohabbat "Aqsh" kisi din
Isiliye is benaam se rishte ko nibhate chale gaye
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«Reply #1 on: September 21, 2012, 05:37:15 PM »
Hi every one. Mai yo india ki nayi member hoon.Mai ek housewife hoon.Mujhe sher o shayari ka shauq bahut pahele se tha. Lekin mujhe koi support nahi mila. Aaj mai koshish kar rahi hoon kuch likhne ki, halanki mere andar aisi koi khaas baat nahi hai. Mai saare members se request karti hoon ke woh meri tehreer ko jaroor pade, aur mere galthiyon ki nishaandehi kare, aur mujhe mere shauq ko poora karne me meri madad kare. Mai aap sabki ahsanmand rahungi.



First Of All, A Warm Welcome To Yoindia..

Aapka Kalaam Mashallah Bohat Achcha Hai Aur Yoindia, Inshallah Aapke Shauq Ko Pura Karne Ka Behtareen Platform Hain.

Umeed Karta Hoon Jab Tak Aap Yahaan Hain Hume Apne Ehsaason Se Bhari, Jazbaaton Se Bhari Shayari Yahaan Share Karte Rahenge.,

May Allah Bless You.

Azeem Aarzu.,,
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«Reply #2 on: September 21, 2012, 05:40:15 PM »

Dil se mohabbat nibhate chale gaye,
Hum unke sitamon ko bhulate chale gaye.
Ashkon ko peekar muskurate chale gaye
Labon par unhi ka naam sajate chale gaye
Unki yaadon me aksar raaton ko jagkar
Kabhi hanste aur kabhi rote chale gaye
Milegi hame bhi ulfat bhari nazar
Ankhon me yehi khwab sajate chale gaye
Pyaar ke dard ko dil me dabakar
Hum wafa pe wafa karte chale gaye
Ho jayegi unhe bhi mohabbat "Aqsh" kisi din
Isiliye is benaam se rishte ko nibhate chale gaye


Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Aapne, Yunhi Likhte Rahein Aur Aate Rahein.
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«Reply #3 on: September 21, 2012, 05:43:04 PM »
Tah dil se swagat hain apka Aqsh ji ...
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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2012, 05:50:27 PM »
Bahut aacha likha hai aap ne or welcome to yoindia me aap ka
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2012, 06:58:30 PM »
Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Aapne, Yunhi Likhte Rahein Aur Aate Rahein.
shukriya aur jazakallah ul khair azeemji
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«Reply #6 on: September 21, 2012, 06:59:27 PM »
Tah dil se swagat hain apka Aqsh ji ...
thnx a lot kaushalji
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«Reply #7 on: September 21, 2012, 07:00:06 PM »
Bahut aacha likha hai aap ne or welcome to yoindia me aap ka
bahut bahut shukriya anmolara ji
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«Reply #8 on: September 21, 2012, 08:09:52 PM »
Aqsh ji warm welcome kam se kam mera to pooraa support rahegaa keep it up God bless you
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«Reply #9 on: September 21, 2012, 08:57:34 PM »
welcome aqsh ji yoindia mein aapka dil se swagat hai  yahan aapko kabhi bhi koi bhi problem ho to  bta sakti hai aap pm ke zariye bhi aur post ke zariye bhi saini sir khawahish ji admin aur hasan sir ko wo jarur solve karenge aapki problem


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«Reply #10 on: September 21, 2012, 09:30:22 PM »
Hi every one. Mai yo india ki nayi member hoon.Mai ek housewife hoon.Mujhe sher o shayari ka shauq bahut pahele se tha. Lekin mujhe koi support nahi mila. Aaj mai koshish kar rahi hoon kuch likhne ki, halanki mere andar aisi koi khaas baat nahi hai. Mai saare members se request karti hoon ke woh meri tehreer ko jaroor pade, aur mere galthiyon ki nishaandehi kare, aur mujhe mere shauq ko poora karne me meri madad kare. Mai aap sabki ahsanmand rahungi.

Dil se mohabbat nibhate chale gaye,
Hum unke sitamon ko bhulate chale gaye.
Ashkon ko peekar muskurate chale gaye
Labon par unhi ka naam sajate chale gaye
Unki yaadon me aksar raaton ko jagkar
Kabhi hanste aur kabhi rote chale gaye
Milegi hame bhi ulfat bhari nazar
Ankhon me yehi khwab sajate chale gaye
Pyaar ke dard ko dil me dabakar
Hum wafa pe wafa karte chale gaye
Ho jayegi unhe bhi mohabbat "Aqsh" kisi din
Isiliye is benaam se rishte ko nibhate chale gaye


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«Reply #11 on: September 21, 2012, 09:58:06 PM »
Khuburat  kalaam  ke  sath  aap  ne  entry  ki  hai.
Aapka  khair  maqdam  hai. Likhti  rahiye.
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«Reply #12 on: September 21, 2012, 09:58:52 PM »
Ek ghazal ke saath introduction..
wah wah wah
swaagat hai aapka.
likhti rahe aati rahe
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«Reply #13 on: September 22, 2012, 10:35:01 AM »
Khuburat  kalaam  ke  sath  aap  ne  entry  ki  hai.
Aapka  khair  maqdam  hai. Likhti  rahiye.
bahut bahut shukriya siddiqui ji
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