Duniya Baat SochTii Reh Jayegi ... ! NARESH MEHRA

by Anshumali on December 26, 2010, 01:36:32 PM
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Jab RooThna Mazboorii Reh Jayegi
Dostii Naam Ki Dostii Reh Jayegi ...

Muh Se Ek Lafz Aor Kaha Toh
Duniya Baat SochTii Reh Jayegi ...

Kar Naa Tuu Intezaar Kisi Kaa
Nazar Waqt Dekhtii Reh Jayegi ...

Tark-E-Ulfat Pe Gaur Zaroor Karnaa
KahiN Zindagi Adhuurii Reh Jayegi ...

Likh Diya Jo Dil Men Aaya "Naresh"
Baad Mere Shayrii Reh Jayegi ...
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«Reply #1 on: December 26, 2010, 01:45:05 PM »
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naresh ji......

bht gehri baat kahi he apne....sidhe dil me utar gayi.....muje sahyari ki jayda jaankari to nahi he but jo apne likha wo bht kam shabdo me bht kuch kah gaya.....bht bht shaandar likha he apne...

Ranjishee To Bas Khoon Me Bah Jayegi
Dosti Har Sitam Has-Kar Sah Jayegi

Har Zakham Bharti He Dosti
Aaj Mene Kaha Kal Duniya Kah Jayegi

Lagale Gale Tu Raqiboo Ko Bhi
Duniya Muh Dekhti Rah Jayegi




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«Reply #2 on: December 26, 2010, 01:57:15 PM »
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behad khubsuart gazal naresh ji.....bht hi achcha likha hai aapne har ek aashar....sply last wala bht achcha laga hume

behad achcha reply mg ji...bht mast likha hai aapne bhi.....
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«Reply #3 on: December 26, 2010, 02:03:32 PM »
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bahut mast Ghazal hai ji.
mast bole to superb hai superb.
kaise or kahan se words milte h ji aapko..
mujhe milta hi nai bhai.
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«Reply #4 on: December 26, 2010, 06:56:48 PM »
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Naresh Jee Aadaab!

Kafi achchi kalaam laye hai aap... Usual Smile
Kam lafzoN meiN Gehraai liye hume sabhi ashaar khoob lage...


         



Jab RooThna Mazboorii Reh Jayegi
Dostii Naam Ki Dostii Reh Jayegi ...

Behad sahiN farmaya aapne daad ..
Bhut umdaa:)         



Muh Se Ek Lafz Aor Kaha Toh
Duniya Baat SochTii Reh Jayegi ...

Naresh jee sher ka khayaal behad khoob hai... Par kam lafzoN meiN sher khula nahi hai puri tarha se.. par aise bhi khoob hai daad .. Usual Smile         

Kar Naa Tuu Intezaar Kisi Kaa
Nazar Waqt Dekhtii Reh Jayegi ...

Waah janab kia baat hai behad umdaa khayaal aur achchi soch ka muzahera diya hai daad .... Usual Smile         


Tark-E-Ulfat Pe Gaur Zaroor Karnaa
KahiN Zindagi Adhuurii Reh Jayegi ...

Achcha sher hai daad ..... Usual Smile         


Likh Diya Jo Dil Men Aaya "Naresh"
Baad Mere Shayrii Reh Jayegi ...

Oye hoye kia baat kahi hai Nareshj jee...
Behad khoob daad hazir hai ....
Isi khayaal par humarabhi aik maqta yaad aaya hume
Mulayza farmaaye......
         


Tuu naa hoNga to bus itna hoNga ParwaaZ
Key is bazm meiN teri hi kami rah jayeNgi
         




Likhate rahiye....
Aise hi gehri soch ke kalaamoN ke saath aate rahiye..

Khush O aabad rahye Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #5 on: December 27, 2010, 02:51:58 AM »
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Jab RooThna Mazboorii Reh Jayegi
Dostii Naam Ki Dostii Reh Jayegi ...

Muh Se Ek Lafz Aor Kaha Toh
Duniya Baat SochTii Reh Jayegi ...

Likh Diya Jo Dil Men Aaya "Naresh"
Baad Mere Shayrii Reh Jayegi ...


Ji .. bahut behtreen rahe ... yeh sabhi ashaar ... Awesome !! behad umdaa ghazal lagi mujhe ...

dil se daad ...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2010, 04:55:04 AM »
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naresh ji......

bht gehri baat kahi he apne....sidhe dil me utar gayi.....muje sahyari ki jayda jaankari to nahi he but jo apne likha wo bht kam shabdo me bht kuch kah gaya.....bht bht shaandar likha he apne...

Ranjishee To Bas Khoon Me Bah Jayegi
Dosti Har Sitam Has-Kar Sah Jayegi

Har Zakham Bharti He Dosti
Aaj Mene Kaha Kal Duniya Kah Jayegi

Lagale Gale Tu Raqiboo Ko Bhi
Duniya Muh Dekhti Rah Jayegi


Bahut bahut shukriya Ji ..... aapki pasandegi aur ijazat afzaai ka ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath .... !
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«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2010, 02:08:52 PM »
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Bahut Hi Khubsurat Likha Hai Aapne Naresh Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2010, 03:39:23 PM »
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behad khubsuart gazal naresh ji.....bht hi achcha likha hai aapne har ek aashar....sply last wala bht achcha laga hume

behad achcha reply mg ji...bht mast likha hai aapne bhi.....

Kasak Ji ... aapki pasandegi aur ijazat afzaai ka bahut shukriya ... aur humeshaa saath ka bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #9 on: December 27, 2010, 10:33:14 PM »
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bahut mast Ghazal hai ji.
mast bole to superb hai superb.
kaise or kahan se words milte h ji aapko..
mujhe milta hi nai bhai.
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thanx
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Nirala Ji ... aapki pasandegi ... hausla afzaai aur ijazat afzaai ka bahut bahut shukriya ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2010, 10:53:01 PM »
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[n]Bohat achche anshu ji
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«Reply #11 on: December 28, 2010, 12:45:39 PM »
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Naresh Jee Aadaab!

Kafi achchi kalaam laye hai aap... Usual Smile
Kam lafzoN meiN Gehraai liye hume sabhi ashaar khoob lage...


          



Likhate rahiye....
Aise hi gehri soch ke kalaamoN ke saath aate rahiye..

Khush O aabad rahye Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile          



Parwaaz Ji ... Aadaab !

Khulkar taareef karne aur itnii ijazat afzaai ka bahut bahut shukriya ...Saath hi aapke humeshaa saath ka bhi ...

aainda bhi aise hi hauslaa badhaate rahen ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ...
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«Reply #12 on: December 29, 2010, 03:30:01 AM »
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Jab RooThna Mazboorii Reh Jayegi
Dostii Naam Ki Dostii Reh Jayegi ...

Muh Se Ek Lafz Aor Kaha Toh
Duniya Baat SochTii Reh Jayegi ...

Likh Diya Jo Dil Men Aaya "Naresh"
Baad Mere Shayrii Reh Jayegi ...


Ji .. bahut behtreen rahe ... yeh sabhi ashaar ... Awesome !! behad umdaa ghazal lagi mujhe ...

dil se daad ...
  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Radhika Ji ... aapki taareef ka aur daad kaa bahut bahut shukriya... saath hi aapke humeshaa saath ka bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #13 on: December 29, 2010, 11:51:45 AM »
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Bahut Hi Khubsurat Likha Hai Aapne Naresh Ji Applause Applause

Bahut bahut shukriya ... Rishi Ji !

aapki pasandegi aur dili daad ka ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #14 on: December 29, 2010, 03:19:25 PM »
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[n]Bohat achche anshu ji

Azeem Ji ... Aadaab !

Adnaa se ehsaasoN ko saraahane ka bahut bahut shukriya ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ... !
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