Ek Ghazal pesh-e-khidmat hai.Jalees sherwani

by wordsmith on May 06, 2009, 05:38:36 PM
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Ye Jo kaali raat hai yaaraa!
Chaar dinoN ki baat hai yaaraa!

Chhat geeli hai aangan sookha!
Ye kaisi barsaat hai yaara!

tum bhi chup ho main bhi chup chup!
Yeh bhi koii baat hai yaara!

Zarf kisi ka kya tole hai!
Apni apni zaat hai yaaraa!

Zabt ke aansoo har koii dekhe!
Yeh aankhoN ki maat hai yaaraa!

Please give your valueble comments.
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«Reply #1 on: May 06, 2009, 06:06:48 PM »
acha likha hai.. keep writing
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«Reply #2 on: May 06, 2009, 06:08:35 PM »
Ye Jo kaali raat hai yaaraa!
Chaar dinoN ki baat hai yaaraa!

Chhat geeli hai aangan sookha!
Ye kaisi barsaat hai yaara!

tum bhi chup ho main bhi chup chup!
Yeh bhi koii baat hai yaara!

Zarf kisi ka kya tole hai!
Apni apni zaat hai yaaraa!

Zabt ke aansoo har koii dekhe!
Yeh aankhoN ki maat hai yaaraa!

Please give your valueble comments.
Jalees Sherwani

Bahut Khoob Wordsmith Ji,

Shally.
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«Reply #3 on: May 06, 2009, 06:16:57 PM »
This Ghazal has already been posted by You Mr. Jalees Sherwani

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/ghazals/ghazal-jalees-sherwani-t44430.0.html

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