Ghazal ....Jalees Sherwani

by wordsmith on March 13, 2009, 05:58:43 AM
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Ye jo kaali raat hai yaaraa!
Chaar dino^N ki baat hai yaaraa!

Chhat geeli hai aa^ngan sookha!
Ye kaisi barsaat hai yaaraa!

Zarf kisi ka kya tole hai!
Apni apni zaat hai yaaraa!

zabt ke aa^nsoo har koi dekhe!
ye aa^nkho^N ki maat hai yaaraa!

Tum bhi chup chup mai^n bhi chup chup!
Dil mai^n kuchh to baat hai yaaraa!

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«Reply #1 on: March 13, 2009, 06:10:29 AM »
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 Applause Applause

Very NICe Wriiten Jalees !

Keep Writing ....( Like to read more from U)
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«Reply #2 on: March 13, 2009, 06:30:37 AM »
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Ye jo kaali raat hai yaaraa!
Chaar dino^N ki baat hai yaaraa!

Chhat geeli hai aa^ngan sookha!
Ye kaisi barsaat hai yaaraa!

Zarf kisi ka kya tole hai!
Apni apni zaat hai yaaraa!

zabt ke aa^nsoo har koi dekhe!
ye aa^nkho^N ki maat hai yaaraa!

Tum bhi chup chup mai^n bhi chup chup!
Dil mai^n kuchh to baat hai yaaraa!

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Bahut Aache Jalees Sherwani Ji,
Welcome to yoindia family...

Na ishq ko samjha tune na samjha paayi mein,
Yeh bhi ek mohabbat-e-nakam ka raaj hai yaaraa.

Maine pyaar jataya rooth ke aur tune manaya hi nahi,
Ye bhi to ek teri bewafayi ka raaj hai yaara.

Bahut door na thi manzil apni iss mod se par tune saath
na nibhaya,
Ye bhi to ek wajah thi ki mein akela hi chalta raha yaara.

Shally.
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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2009, 07:11:20 AM »
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Thanks Sophi for your appricaition.
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«Reply #4 on: March 16, 2009, 07:13:33 AM »
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Thanx a lot Shael sahab.
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