EK HASEEN KA HASEEN KHWAAB HOON MAIN .........HASAN

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Kya   kahooN , achha   hooN , Kharaab   hooN   maiN ,
Jo   bhi   hooN   tera   intikhaab   hooN   maiN

Bach   na   paayegi   tuu   tapish   se   meri ,
Tuu   zameeN   hai   to   aftaab   hooN   maiN

Eik   thha   kal   bhi   zaahir - o - baatin ,
Aaj   bhi   ek   khuli   kitaab   hooN   maiN

Maana   ta'beer    kuchh   naheeN     lekin ,
Ek  HaseeN  ka   haseen   khwaab   hooN   maiN

'Ishq'   ko    uss   ne   aise   samjhaaya :
'Aap  Bhounra  haiN  aur  Gulaab  hoon   maiN'

Sirf   MaaN - Baap   kee   duaaye'N   mileeN ,
Log   kahte   haiN   kaamyaab   hooN   maiN

Uss ne  bus   eik   Sawaal   poochha   thha ,
Aye  'Hasan' , abb   bhi  lajawaab  hooN   maiN

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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2011, 11:15:11 AM »
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HAssan Sahab Bahut Hi Khoob Sher Kahe Hai Aapne Aapni Gazal Mein[

Kya   kahooN , achha   hooN , Kharaab   hooN   maiN ,
Jo   bhi   hooN   tera   intikhaab   hooN   maiN

Eik   thha   kal   bhi   zaahir - o - baatin ,
Aaj   bhi   ek   khuli   kitaab   hooN   maiN

Maana   ta'beer    kuchh   naheeN     lekin ,
Ek  HaseeN  ka   haseen   khwaab   hooN   maiN



Humeh Ye Sher Bahut Pasand Aaye
Dil Se Daad Hazir Hai
Kabul Kijye

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«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2011, 11:37:37 AM »
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Kya   kahooN , achha   hooN , Kharaab   hooN   maiN ,
Jo   bhi   hooN   tera   intikhaab   hooN   maiN

Bach   na   paayegi   tuu   tapish   se   meri ,
Tuu   zameeN   hai   to   aftaab   hooN   maiN

Eik   thha   kal   bhi   zaahir - o - baatin ,
Aaj   bhi   ek   khuli   kitaab   hooN   maiN

Maana   ta'beer    kuchh   naheeN     lekin ,
Ek  HaseeN  ka   haseen   khwaab   hooN   maiN

'Ishq'   ko    uss   ne   aise   samjhaaya :
'Aap  Bhounra  haiN  aur  Gulaab  hoon   maiN'

Sirf   MaaN - Baap   kee   duaaye'N   mileeN ,
Log   kahte   haiN   kaamyaab   hooN   maiN

Uss ne  bus   eik   Sawaal   poochha   thha ,
Aye  'Hasan' , abb   bhi  lajawaab  hooN   maiN



Vakai Hasan sahab
Aap laajavab hai.
Kya kahne..
Daad kubool kijiye janaab.
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«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2011, 12:10:11 PM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Ek HaseeN ka haseen khwab...
Waah waah..Bahut khoob

Daad qubool farmaayen.

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«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2011, 09:50:49 PM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadab!

Kia kahne janab badi khub aur umdaa gazal kahi hai..
Sabhi ashaaroN meiN gazab ki teraNdazi rahi... Usual Smile
Aik aik khayaal ko kafi soNch samjhkar bayaaN kiye hai
aapne daad.. janab..

Aur aaftab aur zameeN ki doori aur kareebi ko achcha aayam
diyaa hai aapne... Usual Smile

"Sirf Maa baap ki duaaeN mili " is sher par gaur farmaiyeNga
kuch mehdood sa ho gaya hai sher... KyuN ke dusre misre meiN
"Log kahte hai" kaha hai aapne usse kuch gair munaseebat paida
ho rahi hai... Ummid hai aap humare ishara samjheN ho.. Usual Smile

Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye
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«Reply #5 on: October 23, 2011, 06:11:30 PM »
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Kamal...Lazwaab...Samajh hi nahi aa raha kya kahoon...bahut Khoob..!!


Khas kar in pantiyo.n ne to dil chhoo liya..!!




Bach   na   paayegi   tuu   tapish   se   meri ,
Tuu   zameeN   hai   to   aftaab   hooN   maiN



Maana   ta'beer    kuchh   naheeN     lekin ,
Ek  HaseeN  ka   haseen   khwaab   hooN   maiN

Uss ne  bus   eik   Sawaal   poochha   thha ,
Aye  'Hasan' , abb   bhi  lajawaab  hooN   maiN


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«Reply #6 on: October 23, 2011, 10:21:39 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: October 23, 2011, 11:37:47 PM »
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Kya   kahooN , achha   hooN , Kharaab   hooN   maiN ,
Jo   bhi   hooN   tera   intikhaab   hooN   maiN

Bach   na   paayegi   tuu   tapish   se   meri ,
Tuu   zameeN   hai   to   aftaab   hooN   maiN

Eik   thha   kal   bhi   zaahir - o - baatin ,
Aaj   bhi   ek   khuli   kitaab   hooN   maiN

Maana   ta'beer    kuchh   naheeN     lekin ,
Ek  HaseeN  ka   haseen   khwaab   hooN   maiN

'Ishq'   ko    uss   ne   aise   samjhaaya :
'Aap  Bhounra  haiN  aur  Gulaab  hoon   maiN'

Sirf   MaaN - Baap   kee   duaaye'N   mileeN ,
Log   kahte   haiN   kaamyaab   hooN   maiN

Uss ne  bus   eik   Sawaal   poochha   thha ,
Aye  'Hasan' , abb   bhi  lajawaab  hooN   maiN


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«Reply #8 on: October 24, 2011, 07:38:12 AM »
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HAssan Sahab Bahut Hi Khoob Sher Kahe Hai Aapne Aapni Gazal Mein[

Kya   kahooN , achha   hooN , Kharaab   hooN   maiN ,
Jo   bhi   hooN   tera   intikhaab   hooN   maiN

Eik   thha   kal   bhi   zaahir - o - baatin ,
Aaj   bhi   ek   khuli   kitaab   hooN   maiN

Maana   ta'beer    kuchh   naheeN     lekin ,
Ek  HaseeN  ka   haseen   khwaab   hooN   maiN



Humeh Ye Sher Bahut Pasand Aaye
Dil Se Daad Hazir Hai
Kabul Kijye

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Sanjeev kash ji,Bahut bahut shukriya,aap ne kalaam pasand kiya aur nacheez ki himmat afzai ki.Apne qimti raai se aage bhi nawaazte rahiye ga.Hasan
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«Reply #9 on: October 24, 2011, 10:34:13 AM »
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Vakai Hasan sahab
Aap laajavab hai.
Kya kahne..
Daad kubool kijiye janaab.
mkv saheb,aap ki hausla afzai ke liye bahut shukrguzar hoon.hausla banaye rakhiyega.Hasan
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«Reply #10 on: October 24, 2011, 12:01:30 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: October 24, 2011, 02:32:43 PM »
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Satish Shukla ji,Ghazal pasand karne aur hausla afzai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.HASAN
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«Reply #12 on: October 24, 2011, 02:37:36 PM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Ek HaseeN ka haseen khwab...
Waah waah..Bahut khoob

Daad qubool farmaayen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


Satish Shukla ji,Ghazal pasand karne aur hausla afzai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.HASAN
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«Reply #13 on: October 24, 2011, 05:18:52 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khub Janab Hasan Saheb...

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...


Shihab...

bahut bahut shukriya, shihab miyan.
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«Reply #14 on: October 24, 2011, 08:29:27 PM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadab!

Kia kahne janab badi khub aur umdaa gazal kahi hai..
Sabhi ashaaroN meiN gazab ki teraNdazi rahi... Usual Smile
Aik aik khayaal ko kafi soNch samjhkar bayaaN kiye hai
aapne daad.. janab..

Aur aaftab aur zameeN ki doori aur kareebi ko achcha aayam
diyaa hai aapne... Usual Smile

"Sirf Maa baap ki duaaeN mili " is sher par gaur farmaiyeNga
kuch mehdood sa ho gaya hai sher... KyuN ke dusre misre meiN
"Log kahte hai" kaha hai aapne usse kuch gair munaseebat paida
ho rahi hai... Ummid hai aap humare ishara samjheN ho.. Usual Smile

Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

Parwaaz saheb ,Bahut mashkoor hoon aap ki hausla afzai ke liye.
  Aap ne jis sher ke baare mein kaha hai uss mein yeh kahne ki koshish ki hai ki maa-baap ki duaaon ke siva kuch nahiin hasil kar saka lekin yeh bhi badi kaamyabi hai. Mazeed behtar tareh se izhaar ke liye aapki rahnumaai chahoonga.Duago,Hasan
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