Ek nai raah per chala hun main........................

by Syed Mohd Mahzar on May 27, 2014, 05:18:03 PM
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Log ye kahte hain bhala hun main
Waqt aajaye to bala hun main

Chor ker un purani raho’n ko
Ek nai raah per chala hun main

Dekh ker ghair ki baho’n me tumhe
Misl parwane ke jala hun main

Naaz hai mujhko apni qismat per
Aysi aaghosh me pala hun main

Maine huq baat hamesha boli
Isliye peeche reh gaya hun main

Mere wajood ka kiya hasil hai
Na jale jo kabhi diya hun main

Mere lahje me  kuch chahek aaye
Sang parindo’n ke bhi raha hun main

           .......Syed Mohd Mahzar

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«Reply #1 on: May 27, 2014, 07:41:58 PM »
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Bahut hi Umdaa Janab..
Behtareen...
Ye sher dil ke bahut karib rahe..

Naaz hai mujhko apni qismat per
Aysi aaghosh me pala hun main

Maine huq baat hamesha boli
Isliye peeche reh gaya hun main

Mere lahje me  kuch chahek aaye
Sang parindo’n ke bhi raha hun main

Hazaron dili daad qubool karein..
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«Reply #2 on: May 27, 2014, 09:11:15 PM »
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og ye kahte hain bhala hun main
Waqt aajaye to bala hun main

Chor ker un purani raho’n ko
Ek nai raah per chala hun main

Dekh ker ghair ki baho’n me tumhe
Misl parwane ke jala hun main

Naaz hai mujhko apni qismat per
Aysi aaghosh me pala hun main

Maine huq baat hamesha boli
Isliye peeche reh gaya hun main

Mere wajood ka kiya hasil hai
Na jale jo kabhi diya hun main

Mere lahje me  kuch chahek aaye
Sang parindo’n ke bhi raha hun main
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«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2014, 09:28:09 PM »
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Waah Waah!!
baut umda

Maine huq baat hamesha boli
Isliye peeche reh gaya hun main

Mere wajood ka kiya hasil hai
Na jale jo kabhi diya hun main

Mere lahje me  kuch chahek aaye
Sang parindo’n ke bhi raha hun main


Kya baat hai
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«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2014, 11:41:57 PM »
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Log ye kahte hain bhala hun main
Waqt aajaye to bala hun main

Chor ker un purani raho’n ko
Ek nai raah per chala hun main

Dekh ker ghair ki baho’n me tumhe
Misl parwane ke jala hun main

Naaz hai mujhko apni qismat per
Aysi aaghosh me pala hun main

Maine huq baat hamesha boli
Isliye peeche reh gaya hun main

Mere wajood ka kiya hasil hai
Na jale jo kabhi diya hun main

Mere lahje me  kuch chahek aaye
Sang parindo’n ke bhi raha hun main

           .......Syed Mohd Mahzar



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«Reply #5 on: May 27, 2014, 11:44:09 PM »
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Chor ker un purani raho’n ko
Ek nai raah per chala hun main

Dekh ker ghair ki baho’n me tumhe
Misl parwane ke jala hun main

Naaz hai mujhko apni qismat per
Aysi aaghosh me pala hun main

Maine huq baat hamesha boli
Isliye peeche reh gaya hun main

Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #6 on: May 28, 2014, 02:05:20 AM »
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waah waah bohut umda sir ji
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«Reply #7 on: May 28, 2014, 02:35:01 AM »
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Wah wah wah wah wah wah !!!!!! zabardast khayaalaat aur bayaan !!!!!! Dheron daad Mazhar sahab !!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: May 28, 2014, 12:05:15 PM »
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वाह....बहुत खूब.....

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«Reply #9 on: May 28, 2014, 07:21:29 PM »
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Mahzar ji bahut hi umdaa peshkash lajawaab ghazal...
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