Main Chala Hoon...!

by souravbagla on April 12, 2010, 09:06:20 AM
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Patthar ko dil ka haal sunane chala hoon,
Ruthi hui kismat ko manane chala hoon,
Apni chahton ka janaza uthaye huye..
Main unse wafa nibhane chala hoon,
Wo galat na the....badnaseeb main tha,
Ye baat zamane ko batane chala hoon,
Aye thandi hawaoon tum kal aana..
Aaj to main aansun bahane chala hoon,
Jahan banaye the maine kal aashiyane...
Aaj usi shaakh ko jalane chala hoon,
Meri baatein kisi ka dil na dukha de..
Isiliye tanhai ko apni gazal sunane chala hoon...!!!
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«Reply #1 on: April 12, 2010, 09:11:16 AM »
Bahut Khoob
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«Reply #2 on: April 12, 2010, 09:22:09 AM »
Wow Sourab ji,bahut achi lagi aapke poem.mindblowing creation.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: April 12, 2010, 12:37:07 PM »
Mere paas shabd nahin ke main tariff kar sakoun iss kalam ki..Bahaut khubsoorat likha hai... Applause Ankhein bhar ayi yeh nazm parr kar...Likte rehna mere bhai.. Applause


Kal jahan maine ashiyane banaye the uss hamsafer ke saath,
Aj wahin uski yaadon ko dafnane chala hoon...

Ashk kahin koi dekhna le meri ankhon main,
Nadi ke kinare baith aj inhe yahin bahane chala hoon...
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«Reply #4 on: April 12, 2010, 01:06:35 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khooob Souravji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ghazal Likhi hai Aapne..

Har lafz Dard Ko Darshata Hua..

Bahut Ache.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Ache Bhai Rahim Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: April 12, 2010, 02:33:40 PM »
Shukriya Khwahish jee.!
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«Reply #6 on: April 12, 2010, 03:05:17 PM »
waah behad khubsurat alfaaz....bahut khoob sourav ji....bahut khoob....
 Applause Applause Applause

Bahut pyara likha aapne Rahim ji..... Applause
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«Reply #7 on: April 12, 2010, 07:48:04 PM »
Shukriya Nikhaar di!
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«Reply #8 on: April 12, 2010, 08:54:05 PM »
Great lines Rahim bhai,bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: April 12, 2010, 10:36:36 PM »
wah janaab bahot khoob
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«Reply #10 on: April 12, 2010, 11:16:08 PM »
bahut khoob likha hai Sourav ji...!!! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

aur aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai Rahim bhai...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: April 13, 2010, 12:08:51 PM »
Shukriya Madhu di aur Kapil dost...!
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